Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Filthy Rich"Illustrated poems
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That's a sad statement about the inequities in life and about the lack of compassion for those who have not. You used all the required words effectively. Congratulations on your second place finish!
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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That's a sad statement about the inequities in life and about the lack of compassion for those who have not. You used all the required words effectively. Congratulations on your second place finish!
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
I thought you did a great job in using all the words required in just two short sentences. I don't consider it much of a feat if an entry is kilometres long.
There are some exceptions like in all rules but otherwise the filthy rich are self centered/absorbed and look down at those working for them.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
I thought you did a great job in using all the words required in just two short sentences. I don't consider it much of a feat if an entry is kilometres long.
There are some exceptions like in all rules but otherwise the filthy rich are self centered/absorbed and look down at those working for them.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for reading this and for your nice review
Comment from Gina Schneller
Very cool artwork. Interesting choice. The writing is short and sweet but completely to the point lol. Do you use the words required. Thank you so much for sharing with us. Best of luck in your writing journey.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Very cool artwork. Interesting choice. The writing is short and sweet but completely to the point lol. Do you use the words required. Thank you so much for sharing with us. Best of luck in your writing journey.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for your nice review, Gina, Much appreciated
Comment from Eugenette Morin
Short and sweet! Well done in using the words to depict a picture of times gone by, times going on, but hopefully not times to come. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Short and sweet! Well done in using the words to depict a picture of times gone by, times going on, but hopefully not times to come. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for the 6 star review, Eugenette. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a clever write as you included all the words required and arranged them cleverly to leave a message that wealthy people are selfish and have little regard for those who serve them, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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This is such a clever write as you included all the words required and arranged them cleverly to leave a message that wealthy people are selfish and have little regard for those who serve them, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, Dolly. Glad you liked it. You are always so kind in your reviews.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is perfect! You managed to use a word in each of just four lines to say something that is clear and to the point. I imagine that those who clean and serve would agree with you. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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This is perfect! You managed to use a word in each of just four lines to say something that is clear and to the point. I imagine that those who clean and serve would agree with you. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for the nice review, Pam. Glad you liked it.
