My Identical Sons In-law
I can barely tell them apart!39 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
Well done on the poem prompt, and the poem, and also on the sentiments expressed. It's such a warm-hearted poem I can see these two men are lucky and probably know it.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Well done on the poem prompt, and the poem, and also on the sentiments expressed. It's such a warm-hearted poem I can see these two men are lucky and probably know it.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Sally, you are so delightful! Thank you for your very kind review!
Comment from Moon baby
Really great poem for this contest! I love that you love both of these sons-in-law equally together and apart, and both have brought you joy and captured your heart! There may be differences but the similarities are what is more important! Written with love and done well!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Really great poem for this contest! I love that you love both of these sons-in-law equally together and apart, and both have brought you joy and captured your heart! There may be differences but the similarities are what is more important! Written with love and done well!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your lovely review & kind words!!
Comment from Bridge
A lovely poem, very touching. You have brought out the individual personalities of your sons-in-law so well. Very well written. Thanks for sharing.
With regards
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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A lovely poem, very touching. You have brought out the individual personalities of your sons-in-law so well. Very well written. Thanks for sharing.
With regards
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thanks Bridge, you are so very kind!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good poem you have penned for the use these words writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and its so neat how your sons in law love and respect their families. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, teri
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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This is a very good poem you have penned for the use these words writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and its so neat how your sons in law love and respect their families. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, teri
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you Teri for your very kind review and words of encouragement.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your illustration captured my attention and caused me to read and now review your post! I can relate a bit to your story, but I have a fraternal son in law and daughter in law. Like you, they each have two children. My daughter has the girls; my son has the boys.
And we love them all. Of course, their children increase our pleasure, with no dread or frowns!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Your illustration captured my attention and caused me to read and now review your post! I can relate a bit to your story, but I have a fraternal son in law and daughter in law. Like you, they each have two children. My daughter has the girls; my son has the boys.
And we love them all. Of course, their children increase our pleasure, with no dread or frowns!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Mark, you completely got my point. I had fun with this because my mother
in-law wasn't the nicest. But she did me a favor, because it made me vow that someday I would be the best that I could be. Therefor by showing all the differences in my daughter's husbands, I could show that to me they were exactly alike, as I love them identically. It was a fun poem to write, and Im so happy for you as well. Thank you again Mark, for the very kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very good humorous poem written to the prompt. Mothers-in-law always seem to get along with the husbands of their daughters, but getting along with the wives of their sons is usually a different story.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Very good humorous poem written to the prompt. Mothers-in-law always seem to get along with the husbands of their daughters, but getting along with the wives of their sons is usually a different story.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thanks Paul, Lol, my sentiments exactly! My mother in-law wasn't the nicest, so I made a vow that I would be the best I could be, and therefore is partly why I wrote this poem.... Thanks for your kind review!
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem shows that these mean have differences but they are alike in the important ways. The love you daughters and the family and are good men.
You used the words well in your ode to your sons in law.
Good luck with the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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This poem shows that these mean have differences but they are alike in the important ways. The love you daughters and the family and are good men.
You used the words well in your ode to your sons in law.
Good luck with the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Lol, my sentiments exactly! My mother in-law wasn't the nicest, so I made a vow that I would be the best I could be, and therefore is partly why I wrote this poem.... Thanks for your kind review!
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You?re welcome on both accounts.
Joan
Comment from Janet Foor
Sweet sweet story about your identical sons-in-law. Everyone should be as fortunate as you but I think that it is Joe and Chris who are the lucky ones to have you as their mother-in-law.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Sweet sweet story about your identical sons-in-law. Everyone should be as fortunate as you but I think that it is Joe and Chris who are the lucky ones to have you as their mother-in-law.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you Janet! You just made my whole weekend! Lol, My mother in-law wasn't the nicest, so I made a vow that I would be the best I could be, and therefore is partly why I wrote this poem.... Thanks for your kind review!
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a charming poem. I like the easy rhythm and rhyme. You should frame it for their Christmas present.
You used the required words and wrote an engaging poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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What a charming poem. I like the easy rhythm and rhyme. You should frame it for their Christmas present.
You used the required words and wrote an engaging poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much Debbie. You are so sweet! Lol, My mother in-law wasn't the nicest, so I made a vow that I would be the best I could be, and therefore is partly why I wrote this poem.... Thanks for your kind review!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A very well written poem in rhyme and story.
The fun you had with it comes through in every line.
I would highlight the words you needed to show that you have each word the contest required.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for the delightful poem.
Best regards
Mary
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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A very well written poem in rhyme and story.
The fun you had with it comes through in every line.
I would highlight the words you needed to show that you have each word the contest required.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for the delightful poem.
Best regards
Mary
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you Mary, I will have to do that. I appreciate you pointing that out to me so much! I did have fun with this. My mother in-law wasn't the nicest, so I made a vow that I would be the best I could be, and therefore is partly why I wrote this poem.... Thanks for your kind review!
