Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Lovely image and nice presentation, Jane.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes how these
creatures have finally made it to
"the land of milk and honey."
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022

Thank you so much, Pam for your generous praise and thoughtful review.
Glad you like the image, too. I had a lot of fun doing this. I recently started including images with my poems and it makes the whole process a lot easier and more fun.

reply by Pam (respa) on 09-Apr-2022

You are very welcome, Jane, and I appreciate your reply. I always use pictures, and it does add another dimension to the work you post.

Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

I like the picture and love watching geese. The mom is so smart and stops traffic. The cars stop to let her babies cross the street. I would not want to mess with one of her babies. I have seen them in action. Thank you for posting such a sweet story.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022

Thanks so much,Carolyn. I love geese, too, and I love the hatching season when all of the babies are born.

reply by Carolyn Dooley on 09-Apr-2022

I have never seen them hatch in real life. And you are welcome.