Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good job on your contest entry, JJ. Your syllables are correct per line. However, the dark font and dark background make it difficult to read. I would lighten one or the other.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

Thanks, Jan. I think you made a good suggestion?I have changed the color of the font and background. Glad you liked the poem.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I am glad your green grass came back! I like the 5-7-5 poem you wrote to celebrate. The green background was a nice touch, too. Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

Thanks so much for the nice review. Glad you liked it.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello Jane jane a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5-7-5 Poem contest entry, you executed it well on the syllable count. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

Thanks so much for the nice review. Glad you liked it.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

It's true that a green lawn is quite something to behold. I like thick spring grass but mostly it gets cut because it looks wild. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

Thanks so much for your nice review. I love a green lawn.