War And God
4 Line 1-5-5-9 Poem Contest Entry God Stops Wars Anywhere51 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very powerful message here. There should be NO wars, in the world ruled by God. Wars are sordid, ugly things and no political differences, no land, nothing in the world is worth a loss of one human life.
Great imagery, visuals and presentation. Best of luck in the contest.
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A very powerful message here. There should be NO wars, in the world ruled by God. Wars are sordid, ugly things and no political differences, no land, nothing in the world is worth a loss of one human life.
Great imagery, visuals and presentation. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
We do need God's help to stop this war. Does Putin believe in God? If he does, he has a bizarre way of proving he does. I pray constantly for the Ukranian people. I know of a person who came from Poland. So, so sad.
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We do need God's help to stop this war. Does Putin believe in God? If he does, he has a bizarre way of proving he does. I pray constantly for the Ukranian people. I know of a person who came from Poland. So, so sad.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
Comment from dmt1967
We pray that God stops wars anywhere. I'm not sure if you meant (anywhere) or (everywhere) whichever, really good poem with a wonderful sentiment. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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We pray that God stops wars anywhere. I'm not sure if you meant (anywhere) or (everywhere) whichever, really good poem with a wonderful sentiment. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
Comment from sunnilicious
I think God intervenes war with weather. But that's about all and it's only for intervals of time. Short poem, however, excellent work. Memorable thought.
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I think God intervenes war with weather. But that's about all and it's only for intervals of time. Short poem, however, excellent work. Memorable thought.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
Comment from Moon baby
Love this! Nicely put, short and powerful! God all mighty may he forgive and save us all! This is my first opportunity to see your work, and I'm so glad I got to see your work!
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Love this! Nicely put, short and powerful! God all mighty may he forgive and save us all! This is my first opportunity to see your work, and I'm so glad I got to see your work!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
Comment from godlucifer
the ending of war is just the beginning of war. gods present,gods deceive,and gods creation is instill in each and every war. your poem was truly blended and written with talent. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
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the ending of war is just the beginning of war. gods present,gods deceive,and gods creation is instill in each and every war. your poem was truly blended and written with talent. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job with your contest entry. Your words flow well, the syllable count is correct per line, and your message is clear.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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Good job with your contest entry. Your words flow well, the syllable count is correct per line, and your message is clear.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from Yardier
Short, sweet and obvious to those who see. Sadly, others want war, confusion, death and the lies to sustain war. Why? Because they are the children of the father of lies. Not only are they deceived, they desire the deception so they may kill with out conscience.
God will not show mercy on the unrepentant.
All the best, Yard.
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Short, sweet and obvious to those who see. Sadly, others want war, confusion, death and the lies to sustain war. Why? Because they are the children of the father of lies. Not only are they deceived, they desire the deception so they may kill with out conscience.
God will not show mercy on the unrepentant.
All the best, Yard.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, I do pray daily that God will end all wars. I understand He works in His time not in ours. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you good luck.
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Yes, I do pray daily that God will end all wars. I understand He works in His time not in ours. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you good luck.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This poem is written with a strong confident hand. The image arrested me right away. Your writing sends a powerful message that I hope your readers will receive. This is a good contest entry and should do well.
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This poem is written with a strong confident hand. The image arrested me right away. Your writing sends a powerful message that I hope your readers will receive. This is a good contest entry and should do well.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022