Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This sounds like memories of a fine childhood and the playing and adventures are fine moments in the past. A very person experience here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022

I was trying to figure out a way to include memories from the past as well as the idea of making new ones. My kids are now 20, 22, and 33? And we are still making memories together with the grace of God! Thanks for your review and comments.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Those simple pleasures you describe bring happiness because they are based on loving relationships, and a sense of fun and delight in simple pleasures. Well written. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022

Thank you, Wendy, for your comments and review! They are much appreciated. Have a great Sunday!

Comment from Mickamus J

Excellent

It is clear that the memory seems to be always fresh in your mind. It seems like a representation of life that you may want to last like an everyday occurrence. I find that it is relatable in a sense of what we would like pleasant and joyful memories to be a part of our current living.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022

yes, your words are true for me. If I start to feel sad, I think about my memories and they make me happy! I appreciate your kind words and review.

Comment from Rachel Jamerson1

Excellent

Beautiful! I love it. I remember the furniture draped with blankets - It was the greatest of times. They go by so fast. I agree with you, true happiness is when you are with those you love.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Memories are one thing that nobody can take from us! Hugs and blessings.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your poem is beautiful and celebrates your children in a happy way, Leann.
I enjoyed reading it. Your words are descriptive, flow smoothly, and create great imagery.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Your kindness is much appreciated. Hugs and blessings.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, the so many little things combined with the time spent together, what a wonderful description of happiness, the time, the memories, and the togetherness, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Your kind and encouraging comments are so appreciated. Have a great weekend.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Memories, collects many sights and instances that together build the times of our lives that remain as touchstones for all of our happy.

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Regarding your question?
Please elaborate. Does it not make sense? Should I change the contraction? I'm not sure what you mean. Thank you though, and if you can, please give me more information.
Hugs!

reply by Bill Schott on 26-Mar-2022

I changed the word you wrote, four, to the word I put in parenthesis, for.

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022

Oh, thank you so, so much! My screen reader doesn't distinguish in anyway between homonyms, and I miss them all the time! Much appreciated.