Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

I just read your poem.
With so few words, you give a powerful message
It is a difficult task and you did it well.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for your nice review, Mary. So glad you like the poem.

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Good

And only a few words often say a lot. Silence can convey many things, especially among lovers.
My only critique is that you really need an accompanying picture, especially when there are so few words. They enhance each other in the reader's eyes.
Good luck.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022

Thanks, Pam. That?s a good idea. Glad you liked it.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You pulled that off with words to spare! And, yes, I get that those words are silent and yes, that says a lot. Good work. Thanks for sharing this here, and keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for reading this. Glad you liked it. Take care.