Comment from Jenifer Bellott

Excellent

Great choice of words. Your poem makes me imagine greed as a predatory bird--swooping down and stealing away what it wishes. Wonderful use of imagery in so few words. Well done!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for your lovely review.So glad you like the poem.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice presentation.
-A good title and poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the personification of greed
and flying the nest.
-A very good concluding line that
is also a good message about
what greed is capable of doing.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for reading this and for your lovely thoughtful review. I appreciate it very much.

reply by Pam (respa) on 26-Mar-2022

You are very welcome.

Comment from giraffmang

Good

Hi there,

you might want to recheck the rules on this competition. You have all the required syllables but all three lines have to rhyme, not just lines two and three.

Just as a by the way, the background colour is not a great choice.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022

You?re right. Thanks for pointing that out. I have changer that and the background color.