Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Soldiers"Illustrated poems
4 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, a timely poem - vivid imagery. Good syllable count.
Well done. Question ... I don't know why your post has a language warning. It doesn't seem necessary. I only ask because that warning may limit the amount of reviews you receive...just my humble opinion--trying to help. War and strong language go hand-in-hand. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Hello author, a timely poem - vivid imagery. Good syllable count.
Well done. Question ... I don't know why your post has a language warning. It doesn't seem necessary. I only ask because that warning may limit the amount of reviews you receive...just my humble opinion--trying to help. War and strong language go hand-in-hand. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for your kind review and for your good suggestion. I have removed the language warning. That was an oversight on my part. So glad you like the poem.
Comment from T B Botts
Well done on your poem. I don't believe I've ever seen a format like that. The words you've written are spot on. The soldier's job is to obey orders, but how often they are sent into combat and to their death in order to appease the pride of the commander in chief. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Well done on your poem. I don't believe I've ever seen a format like that. The words you've written are spot on. The soldier's job is to obey orders, but how often they are sent into combat and to their death in order to appease the pride of the commander in chief. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. So glad you like the poem.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Good, good, good, really you have spoken the right words to define a soldier at war; a soldier is committed, duty bound, obliged for going forward and fight for his country; thank you for sharing this; being a short-sighted man, I had to waste my precious time to read the shortest font and illegible red like background with black smallest font, you have written this for your self-joy, self-entertainment, self-pleasure, you assume, I may be wrong, you are wiser, on online, at a public place for reading, thinking readers are not so wise, unless you publish your post not in black and white but choosing an illegible stand for getting your self-pride of writing not for readers; a reader of my stand never rate any work below six or five stars, as I do not offer my poor advice or suggestion, for I know writer or author has his own stand and pleas and purpose and I know how hard it is to write a line, how harder it is to print a line, and how hardest to write a line-print-publish on online, as I get no extra benefit by offering advice or suggestion, I speak the truth, my feeling and experie4nce of losing my precious time for nothing; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Good, good, good, really you have spoken the right words to define a soldier at war; a soldier is committed, duty bound, obliged for going forward and fight for his country; thank you for sharing this; being a short-sighted man, I had to waste my precious time to read the shortest font and illegible red like background with black smallest font, you have written this for your self-joy, self-entertainment, self-pleasure, you assume, I may be wrong, you are wiser, on online, at a public place for reading, thinking readers are not so wise, unless you publish your post not in black and white but choosing an illegible stand for getting your self-pride of writing not for readers; a reader of my stand never rate any work below six or five stars, as I do not offer my poor advice or suggestion, for I know writer or author has his own stand and pleas and purpose and I know how hard it is to write a line, how harder it is to print a line, and how hardest to write a line-print-publish on online, as I get no extra benefit by offering advice or suggestion, I speak the truth, my feeling and experie4nce of losing my precious time for nothing; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for your nice review. So glad you like the poem. I always hope that readers will enjoy what I write. Got a quick question, if you don?t mind. Would the poem be more enjoyable if I changes the color and font?
I could easily do that.
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with the prompt and guidelines. I can picture the boots crunching on the ground below. Thank you for sharing this poem here. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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You did a great job with the prompt and guidelines. I can picture the boots crunching on the ground below. Thank you for sharing this poem here. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for your nice review. You are always so thoughtful and encouraging.
