Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice presentation, Jane.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job appealing to the senses
with colors and scents of the flowers.
-I like the joyful mood as you enjoy
the flowers in your garden.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022

---

reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for your lovely review, Pam. Glad you liked the poem. It was fun to write.

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Mar-2022

You are very welcome, Jane.

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

Spoken like a true hippie - "out of sight", lol!
You use sight, smell, sound, and emotion for your poem - nice job. You've also managed to follow the guidelines for this ABC poem. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2022

---

reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for reading this, Pam. Glad you like it. This poem was fun to write?I love flowers.