Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

This is a well written minute poem. The poem flows well and your message is clear. The sixty syllable count is on point. The first line is a strong opening line. Very nice poem.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022

Thanks. I?m so glad you like it. It was fun to do.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello Jane Jane, a Merry Monday to you. I liked your minute poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for your kind review. Have a great day. Take care.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a very nice poem with some touching and evocative imagery, I enjoyed reading it. I particularly like the way you describe the stars. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for your lovely review. I have always loved twinkling stars.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I think you will find that a minute poem has 60 syllables, this is why it is called a minute poem and yours here falls a little short, but you could adjust it before the contest ends, I enjoyed the sentiments here Jane, your poem just needs to be expanded, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022

Dolly, thanks so much for letting me know.I was way off on this one!!

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 13-Mar-2022

You can easily fix it, good luck x x x