Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

Yes, God put us on earth to live and let live and love. And he wanted us to treat all people as brothers and sisters. Something went wrong many many years ago. Thank you for the awareness of love.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022

Thanks, Carolyn. That?s exactly what I was trying to say in the poem, but you said it much better.

reply by Carolyn Dooley on 11-Mar-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I love what you have written here, love without condition earns us love in return, if I may your last line has six words-thus six syllables, you may need to correct this, best wishes ****kahpot

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022

Hi.Thanks so much for the nice review. And thanks for letting me know about the syllable count I have corrected that. Take care.