Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Zippy"Illustrated poems
2 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Unique and a fun read. Definitely humorous, I like the internal rhyme and the external rhyme. Not sure of what you mean by dip, but it adds to the fun of your poem. Good entry, best of luck.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Unique and a fun read. Definitely humorous, I like the internal rhyme and the external rhyme. Not sure of what you mean by dip, but it adds to the fun of your poem. Good entry, best of luck.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much. Glad you like it. The dip refers to a dip that you would serve with crackers. I originally used it as an idea for a valentines care with one male green onion shading a female green onion around a bowl of dip with crackers.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi Jane Jane,
This is an endearing humor
poem. Short, but sweet! I
used to work in food service
and one of my duties was the
salad bar. Your cute poem
reminds me of some of the
restaurant customers flirting
over vegetables and cottage
cheese, lol!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Hi Jane Jane,
This is an endearing humor
poem. Short, but sweet! I
used to work in food service
and one of my duties was the
salad bar. Your cute poem
reminds me of some of the
restaurant customers flirting
over vegetables and cottage
cheese, lol!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thanks,Regina. Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to do.
