Comment from Rachel Jamerson1

Excellent

Great depiction of life, it is unending reaching out into eternity. You are also right in that the effects of the journey can be friendly or not so friendly.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022

Thanks for your thoughtful review. Your choice of words, reaching out into eternity, is very beautifully poetic. Take care.
Jane

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This is wonderful, and an excellent poem about life, though I do count twenty one syllables here, hope I am wrong, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022

You are right?I have changed the number of syllables. Thanks for pointing that out. So glad you like the poem.
Jane