Tin Stars and Yankee Gold
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24 total reviews
Comment from royowen
One couldn't help admiring our heroes, they have the appearance of being Robin Hood, robbing the rich to give to the poor, but really they weren't quite like that, but at least they are thoughtful lynch-fodder, well done Earl, an excellent post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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One couldn't help admiring our heroes, they have the appearance of being Robin Hood, robbing the rich to give to the poor, but really they weren't quite like that, but at least they are thoughtful lynch-fodder, well done Earl, an excellent post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thanks Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this chapter
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Most welcome
Comment from jessizero
I didn't think I would enjoy this, but I really, really did. I like how the main characters did "the Lord's work." Keep up the good work! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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I didn't think I would enjoy this, but I really, really did. I like how the main characters did "the Lord's work." Keep up the good work! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this chapter
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Loved this chapter!! I'm really going to enjoy this story, although we all know and love Boone, it's going to be a wonderful novel to read through your telling. I'm glad the clark was given a $100, I'm sure he appreciated it. And what a nice surprise Whipstock is going to have! Lol. Well done, I'll be watching for chapter 3. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Loved this chapter!! I'm really going to enjoy this story, although we all know and love Boone, it's going to be a wonderful novel to read through your telling. I'm glad the clark was given a $100, I'm sure he appreciated it. And what a nice surprise Whipstock is going to have! Lol. Well done, I'll be watching for chapter 3. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Sandra. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this chapter.
Comment from lyenochka
I see they have become the western Robin Hoods, rescuing poor farmers from mean bankers and taxmen. It's a good thing Whipstock was so kind and hospitable to these outlaws.
I can't remember from your opening chapter which one was related to that lady you introduced us to.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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I see they have become the western Robin Hoods, rescuing poor farmers from mean bankers and taxmen. It's a good thing Whipstock was so kind and hospitable to these outlaws.
I can't remember from your opening chapter which one was related to that lady you introduced us to.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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It was Boone who was related to Maddie. Thank you very much . I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this chapter.
Comment from poetwatch
Thanks for clearing that specie-money for me, Earl. You got yourself a good start in the highwaymen department. Seem like you're into western cause you know the people and the language. Carpetbaggers destroyed many lives stealing from the poor folk and getting rich. Good story. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thanks for clearing that specie-money for me, Earl. You got yourself a good start in the highwaymen department. Seem like you're into western cause you know the people and the language. Carpetbaggers destroyed many lives stealing from the poor folk and getting rich. Good story. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this chapter.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I got a real kick out of this piece. Take from the rich and give to the poor, a sort of Robin Hood get even story that give the tax collector as good as he sends. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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I got a real kick out of this piece. Take from the rich and give to the poor, a sort of Robin Hood get even story that give the tax collector as good as he sends. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much a virtual six is great. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this chapter.
Comment from nomi338
Some good ole boys doin' the Lords work. What a hoot. Greedy bastards who take advantage of hard working honest people are still hard at work. They rob from people who can least afford to be robbed and blame the problems poor folk have on everybody but themselves. How can the problems of the honest poor be the fault of other poor people while the rich just seem to get richer?
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Some good ole boys doin' the Lords work. What a hoot. Greedy bastards who take advantage of hard working honest people are still hard at work. They rob from people who can least afford to be robbed and blame the problems poor folk have on everybody but themselves. How can the problems of the honest poor be the fault of other poor people while the rich just seem to get richer?
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this chapter.
Comment from Ethan Vandervelden
I really liked this chapter! It is well written, has good dialogue and is full of action. I enjoyed how casually you added a bank robbery into the chapter, which kept it exciting.
One potential error for your considration:
{Mopping up the last bean juice with a crust of bread, Brady answered.(,)}--comma, not period at end.
I'm looking forward to learning more about the characters and learning their motivations and plans!
Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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I really liked this chapter! It is well written, has good dialogue and is full of action. I enjoyed how casually you added a bank robbery into the chapter, which kept it exciting.
One potential error for your considration:
{Mopping up the last bean juice with a crust of bread, Brady answered.(,)}--comma, not period at end.
I'm looking forward to learning more about the characters and learning their motivations and plans!
Well done!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for the six star rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this chapter.
Comment from Jay Squires
You must be a walking encyclopedia of western lore, Earl. This is the second or third piece I've read of yours, and they don't disappoint. I couldn't find anything substantially wrong. You missed several spacings between paragraphs, but that's all fixable. I like your voice. It's easy and conversational. There's a good balance between dialogue and narrative and no description for description's sake. Everything's clean and crisp. Great job.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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You must be a walking encyclopedia of western lore, Earl. This is the second or third piece I've read of yours, and they don't disappoint. I couldn't find anything substantially wrong. You missed several spacings between paragraphs, but that's all fixable. I like your voice. It's easy and conversational. There's a good balance between dialogue and narrative and no description for description's sake. Everything's clean and crisp. Great job.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Jay. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my book.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Robin Hood western style in the 1800's . Good job conveying the purpose of good will. .........................................................................................................
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Robin Hood western style in the 1800's . Good job conveying the purpose of good will. .........................................................................................................
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my book.
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very well
