Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Took me awhile to get the internal rhyme here, I think it works well, it is a poem that gets the reader thinking, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022

Thank you so much for reading this. Glad you enjoyed it. That moon is a sly old fellow. Lol

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The moon is indeed animated and also plays hide and seek with us constantly, the moon is mysterious and mystical and I always gaze at it, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022

Thanks, Dolly. Glad you like the poem. The moon fascinates me as well. It is almost like he is talking to us.