Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A good topic and effective imagery, Jane.
-I like the premise in line one,
followed by the color imagery.
-A creative interpretation of what
God intended and what he said.
-I like the positive tone of the poem, too.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022

Thanks so much, Pam.
I appreciate your kind words and thoughtful review.
I have always loved sunrises and sunsets.

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022

Thanks so much, Pam.
I appreciate your kind words and thoughtful review.
I have always loved sunrises and sunsets.

reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Feb-2022

You are very welcome. They are very beautiful.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Jane,
This poem describes the beauty of a sunrise and the hope it brings for the day. It shows us how we need to be thankful for all the beauty it the world and remember who it comes from.
Keep writng and stay heatlhy
Joan

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022

Thanks so much. I?m so glad you like the poem.
To me, the proof of God?s presence is the beauty of the sunrises and sunsets.
Take care.
Jane

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022

Thanks so much. I?m so glad you like the poem.
To me, the proof of God?s presence is the beauty of the sunrises and sunsets.
Take care.
Jane