His Promise
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Comment from dragonpoet
It is so sad when childhood memories or bad adult relationships cause a person to hid such hurt and to mistrust and doubt love. It is good that he has decided to let it all be in the past and return to true life and try again.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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It is so sad when childhood memories or bad adult relationships cause a person to hid such hurt and to mistrust and doubt love. It is good that he has decided to let it all be in the past and return to true life and try again.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Sorry for the copy/paste response
?m sorry it?s taken so long to get to these reviews. Some personal issues in my life.
Please forgive me!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Hi Melissa,
Hopefully those issued have been resolved in a positive manner. No apology necessary,
You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from SimianSavant
I'm bookmarking this for the song you shared. Somehow I've never heard it before, and it's a good one.
Visually you set this up very nicely. The hourglass image is awesome.
I hesitantly offer two suggestions:
-consider not capitalizing the beginnings of lines by default. This is a stylistic decision for sure, and I think it might add fluidity to some of your text. You could still capitalize proper nouns etc. It's a more modern look, but if the idea makes you cringe, pay it no heed.
-consider omitting the middle instance of "the hourglass has been turned", in order to bookend your piece, and let it breathe.
What I need is a three-day hourglass that tells me how much time I have before the workweek starts again!
Nice work. Best,
Harambe
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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I'm bookmarking this for the song you shared. Somehow I've never heard it before, and it's a good one.
Visually you set this up very nicely. The hourglass image is awesome.
I hesitantly offer two suggestions:
-consider not capitalizing the beginnings of lines by default. This is a stylistic decision for sure, and I think it might add fluidity to some of your text. You could still capitalize proper nouns etc. It's a more modern look, but if the idea makes you cringe, pay it no heed.
-consider omitting the middle instance of "the hourglass has been turned", in order to bookend your piece, and let it breathe.
What I need is a three-day hourglass that tells me how much time I have before the workweek starts again!
Nice work. Best,
Harambe
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Hi "H". I have taken your advice on the middle, repeated verse and I thank you for taking the time to read and leave your advice. I grow with each review :),
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This is on fire!!! And the art is dope too.
As a whole, you have skills that keeps the
attention of your readers. And that makes for
a hot artist. So Keep Writing. And try not to forget
to stop by to talk. Either way, Stay Connected
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This is on fire!!! And the art is dope too.
As a whole, you have skills that keeps the
attention of your readers. And that makes for
a hot artist. So Keep Writing. And try not to forget
to stop by to talk. Either way, Stay Connected
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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My goodness this review has left me speechless :) I am absolutely delighted.
Thank you very much!
Always
Justafan
Missy
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No problem. And if you would like to know more about what I do, you can catch me at? www . reverbnation . com/titanblack222
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Missy,
Fabulous!!!! I read your poem and could not wait to see what was coming next. Your writing gripped me until the very end then you matched it with the perfect song. Stunning job girl!!!!
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Missy,
Fabulous!!!! I read your poem and could not wait to see what was coming next. Your writing gripped me until the very end then you matched it with the perfect song. Stunning job girl!!!!
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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?m sorry it?s taken so long to get to these reviews. Some personal issues in my life.
Please forgive me!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from royowen
What a beautiful and unusual,poem, with a strong message and so well well written, very few write a free verse as well as occasionally I write one, and really enjoy, if I can stop my metronome long enough, well done Missy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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What a beautiful and unusual,poem, with a strong message and so well well written, very few write a free verse as well as occasionally I write one, and really enjoy, if I can stop my metronome long enough, well done Missy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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?m sorry it?s taken so long to get to these reviews. Some personal issues in my life.
Please forgive me!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Bless you Missy
Comment from scongrove
Aww... just loved this! It deserved a six. But still, all out. :(
This poem kinda feels like me. I know how it feels not to trust after being jaded so many times. You're always wondering if it's going to happen again.
I love the video you added. Clever!
Thanks for sharing. It is really heartfelt.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Aww... just loved this! It deserved a six. But still, all out. :(
This poem kinda feels like me. I know how it feels not to trust after being jaded so many times. You're always wondering if it's going to happen again.
I love the video you added. Clever!
Thanks for sharing. It is really heartfelt.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Two reviews in one day!! Awesome and a big thank you, Shana :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is an interesting piece and I am not sure what to make of it. His Monday's coming...what exactly is this supposed to mean? I 'get' that he has been burned a time or two but haven't we all? What is special about him that you wrote a poem for him? I love the presentation with its different color schemes throughout the poem form. And I have always loved the Mama's and the Papa's music and lyrics as well as their stage presence. I just don't understand the significance of the song Monday, Monday.
If you don't mind, I would like a clarification for this one, please.
Have a great weekend!
Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This is an interesting piece and I am not sure what to make of it. His Monday's coming...what exactly is this supposed to mean? I 'get' that he has been burned a time or two but haven't we all? What is special about him that you wrote a poem for him? I love the presentation with its different color schemes throughout the poem form. And I have always loved the Mama's and the Papa's music and lyrics as well as their stage presence. I just don't understand the significance of the song Monday, Monday.
If you don't mind, I would like a clarification for this one, please.
Have a great weekend!
Jesse
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This is a great friend of mine and it was written with him in mind. He calls his retirement from "JohnQ public" as his Monday. No worries with residual income.
The song choice was simply because of the word "Monday. Nothing sinister just one man?s look at life after working all his life.
Thank you for your review
Always
Justafan
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Oh...I see said the blind man.
Have a nice day,
Jesse
Comment from Ric Myworld
"Monday's coming," good or bad. So we had all better get ready and start counting the days, living each one to the fullest, until the payback calendar reads Monday. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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"Monday's coming," good or bad. So we had all better get ready and start counting the days, living each one to the fullest, until the payback calendar reads Monday. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you again...Two reviews in one day. You're catching up :)
Hugs
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Begin Again
Good one, Missy
Plant that seed deep inside the mind and heart and let it blossom. Our world tends to give us a field of weeds, but if we continue to nurture the good thoughts we can clear the weeds and our lives.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Good one, Missy
Plant that seed deep inside the mind and heart and let it blossom. Our world tends to give us a field of weeds, but if we continue to nurture the good thoughts we can clear the weeds and our lives.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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You always make me smile reading your review and this is no exception. Thank you, my friend.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We do dread certain dates in our calendar, an appointment or a meeting we fear and this anticipation of fear is often worse than the event itself, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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We do dread certain dates in our calendar, an appointment or a meeting we fear and this anticipation of fear is often worse than the event itself, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hi there Ms. D. It's lovely to see your smiling face in my reviews. Thank you so very much :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
