Comment from Tom Horonzy

Good

Maybe I'm too tired to justify my rating. I romped... buffalo... two children. Who twirled the yo-yo. Time for bed. Good luck. ...........................................................

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022

Hi. I appreciate your rating but I am puzzled as to what you think of the poem. Would love some more feedback. Thanks

reply by Tom Horonzy on 20-Feb-2022

I need more clarity. You speak of two child but name but one. Did the buffalo giggle? Was the buffalo supposedly the second child. And as you held the other in your arms was it a friendship or something more? Stanza one was rhythmic and the others less.

Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .

Excellent

Give me more I was very intrigued emotional story thank you for sharing have a blessed day keep up the good work stay committed thanks again for sharing

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022

Thank you so much for the kind review.I?m so glad you like it.

reply by Giftedone.Eric Wallace . on 19-Feb-2022

The welcome