Julie
All American academic girl.4 total reviews
Comment from cupa tea
Wouldn't we all love to have a life like that.
I think you've left a few words out for these sentences to work.
She is ready to get married and a job as a tax attorney.
Life indeed treated her somewhat, and she deserves it.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Wouldn't we all love to have a life like that.
I think you've left a few words out for these sentences to work.
She is ready to get married and a job as a tax attorney.
Life indeed treated her somewhat, and she deserves it.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from John Ciarmello
Well done! This certainly tells a full story Beginning, middle and end. I'm happy she is living a graced life and I hope that continues for her. This read nicely and presented concise detail.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Well done! This certainly tells a full story Beginning, middle and end. I'm happy she is living a graced life and I hope that continues for her. This read nicely and presented concise detail.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
Well, if the girl looks like the one in the picture I'd say she has everything going for her already. Lucky husband. I can see that flash at the end. And it indeed seems that God has blessed her early and often. Along with hard work and good choices.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Well, if the girl looks like the one in the picture I'd say she has everything going for her already. Lucky husband. I can see that flash at the end. And it indeed seems that God has blessed her early and often. Along with hard work and good choices.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Heather Burroughs
This is a good story, especially using only 100 words. There is one sentence I stumbled on... "Life indeed treated her somewhat"
Is there supposed to be a word after that?
Either way, great job and good luck in the contest. Many blessings to you.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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This is a good story, especially using only 100 words. There is one sentence I stumbled on... "Life indeed treated her somewhat"
Is there supposed to be a word after that?
Either way, great job and good luck in the contest. Many blessings to you.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thank you!
