Angels are near
The tree was a life saver6 total reviews
Comment from writer723
This story is very heart-warming and lovely. You described the scenario well where an angel is believed to have intervened in someone's life. I think angels are among us and that they do rescue us sometimes. Your writing illustrates this idea very well. Nice job!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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This story is very heart-warming and lovely. You described the scenario well where an angel is believed to have intervened in someone's life. I think angels are among us and that they do rescue us sometimes. Your writing illustrates this idea very well. Nice job!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thankyou so much
Comment from Versch
That must have been a terrifying experience, especially with such young kids in the car. Indeed, the angels must have saved you that day. I always believe since I was a kid that angels are normally present when there are kids around, looking after them. Blessings to you!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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That must have been a terrifying experience, especially with such young kids in the car. Indeed, the angels must have saved you that day. I always believe since I was a kid that angels are normally present when there are kids around, looking after them. Blessings to you!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, I am sure you were protected, by angelic beings during that nightmare experience. You have written about it well and with clarity. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Yes, I am sure you were protected, by angelic beings during that nightmare experience. You have written about it well and with clarity. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
You inject a good portion of emotionality into this write which sees it through well. We always look for reasons when the strange or inexplicable occur when we end up relatively unscathed when perhaps we shouldn't. Whether it's God, angels, fate, karma, whatever.
Good write
I was so distraught mentally - as distraught is an emotional state, you don't really need mentally here.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Hi there,
You inject a good portion of emotionality into this write which sees it through well. We always look for reasons when the strange or inexplicable occur when we end up relatively unscathed when perhaps we shouldn't. Whether it's God, angels, fate, karma, whatever.
Good write
I was so distraught mentally - as distraught is an emotional state, you don't really need mentally here.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a good story that makes it seem you certainly owed your lives to an angel. Before you submit a story, you should have it formatted to a left margin. You also have a few other problems you might want to change. "If we had (gone) any . . ." ". . . smashed in (our0 windshield." ". . . offered to (take) us . . . " You can correct your manuscript your manuscript by going to My Post and going to edit. Be sure you go to bottom of story to push a button that says done or finish.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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This is a good story that makes it seem you certainly owed your lives to an angel. Before you submit a story, you should have it formatted to a left margin. You also have a few other problems you might want to change. "If we had (gone) any . . ." ". . . smashed in (our0 windshield." ". . . offered to (take) us . . . " You can correct your manuscript your manuscript by going to My Post and going to edit. Be sure you go to bottom of story to push a button that says done or finish.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Shirley McLain
God and his angels were with you. What a wonderful story to be able to tell. I have been blessed at times also. You did a great job, and I didn't find any errors. Have a wonderful evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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God and his angels were with you. What a wonderful story to be able to tell. I have been blessed at times also. You did a great job, and I didn't find any errors. Have a wonderful evening. Shirley
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Shirley 🙂
