God On Dawn
Tonight, God made Dawn an Angel26 total reviews
Comment from lindafisher
This is a clever piece of writing, showing that in the end we all get our just deserts. The best of us become angels, the good get another chance. The likes of Ron will pay.
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This is a clever piece of writing, showing that in the end we all get our just deserts. The best of us become angels, the good get another chance. The likes of Ron will pay.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This forty-two-word spiritual story, God on Dawn, tells the final tale of Dawn, Dona, and Ron as they pass from this life into their just reward.
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This forty-two-word spiritual story, God on Dawn, tells the final tale of Dawn, Dona, and Ron as they pass from this life into their just reward.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
Comment from Hawk37
Nicely done you were able to fill the quota with 1/6 of the words already taken by the locked-in word choices, must have been tough, that only gave your 36 words of breathing room to fit in the 6 I don't think would be capable of doing that myself.
The read was impactful read it three time well done again.
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Nicely done you were able to fill the quota with 1/6 of the words already taken by the locked-in word choices, must have been tough, that only gave your 36 words of breathing room to fit in the 6 I don't think would be capable of doing that myself.
The read was impactful read it three time well done again.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from tfawcus
This short piece illustrates the idea that people are held accountable for the conduct of their lives when the day of reckoning comes. You have met the requirements of the contest as laid down in the rules.
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This short piece illustrates the idea that people are held accountable for the conduct of their lives when the day of reckoning comes. You have met the requirements of the contest as laid down in the rules.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from Shirley McLain
You created what I would consider most of the words in your 42 words as true. As a Christian I believe in heaven and hell. You did an excellent job and I enjoyed the read. Have a great evening. Shirley
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You created what I would consider most of the words in your 42 words as true. As a Christian I believe in heaven and hell. You did an excellent job and I enjoyed the read. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a very creative piece. The first four sentences, give the feeling of inspirational uplifting. The fifth sentence is a surprise, because Ron is not the upstanding person that the previous characters are. But the sixth sentences is unexpected and therefore humorous. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
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This is a very creative piece. The first four sentences, give the feeling of inspirational uplifting. The fifth sentence is a surprise, because Ron is not the upstanding person that the previous characters are. But the sixth sentences is unexpected and therefore humorous. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. You used the necessary words and told how three lives outcome was influenced by the choices made.
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. You used the necessary words and told how three lives outcome was influenced by the choices made.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your story. Your writing proves that you don't need 1,000+ words to tell a powerful story with an equally powerful message. Do you have other work on this site? Keep writing.
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I enjoyed reading your story. Your writing proves that you don't need 1,000+ words to tell a powerful story with an equally powerful message. Do you have other work on this site? Keep writing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear ALCREATOR LITT DEAR DR,
I enjoyed your fiction very much. You did include all the required words. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
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Dear ALCREATOR LITT DEAR DR,
I enjoyed your fiction very much. You did include all the required words. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
Comment from Ulla
Well, I think the the morale of this little poem must be that just because you died from the Corona virus, it doesn't automatically follow that you get entrance to heaven. Ron got what he deserved. Ulla:)))
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Well, I think the the morale of this little poem must be that just because you died from the Corona virus, it doesn't automatically follow that you get entrance to heaven. Ron got what he deserved. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
