Comment from karenina

Excellent

Interesting, to approach this from the opposite side... Loss of faith would sap the joy of life. This one unsettled me! My guardian angel is singing "Amazing Grace!"
Karenina

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022

The topic was fiction, and that's all I could think of! One reviewer reminded me the topic, also, was "story," and that I had forgotten. I thought wouldn't it be terrible if it was true God didn't care. I'm so glad He does. I like your angel!

reply by karenina on 08-Feb-2022

In my opinion your "story" is as well developed as any could be in so few words! It is a fiction contest, after all!
Well done!

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022

I didn't mean. This reviewer has been very kind to me consistently--as have you. Thank you!

reply by karenina on 08-Feb-2022

No! I totally understand! We learn and grow from every perception!

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022

Comment from Bill Schott

Good

This twenty-one-word spiritual story, Not True, has the word count and necessary words, but I don't see a story here. I don't think the challenge was to simply say something untrue.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022

Thanks for your review, Bill. I see your point, I missed the word "story" when I read the prompt.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Well done on using these three words and proclaiming what the Lord is not. He does see everything we do, is there to hear our prayers and send us the help we need.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022

Thank your for the review. I new you would agree with me.; )

reply by Anne Johnston on 08-Feb-2022

You are welcome.