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Beyond me

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Comment from Aussie
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Beautiful presentation. No one has looked upon the face of God and lived - so says the Bible. Even Moses had to speak to a burning bush. I think this is because God is Spirit and has no form as such. But He shows himself in the birds and bees and flowers, in all sorts of ways. If we were to paint Him our rendition would be correct from our hearts. K xx

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
    Yes, you are right. Lovely thoughts. Thanks for reviewing!
    Wendy
Comment from Begin Again
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Thought-provoking and beautiful. I believe each of us has our own vision, but of course, none of us know for sure. If we believe, then we accept him as our hearts see him.

Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
    Absolutely true. I try to picture Him as young and Middle Eastern in appearance, but I don't see clearly at all. Nevertheless "even though we haven't seen Him, we love Him" ....Thanks so much for the review.
    Wendy
Comment from Irish Rain
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Even in our greatest of imaginings...we can't
come close.
Such a true, and lovely entry.
I also like the artwork you chose.
Good luck,
blessings...

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    Thank you so very much for your very encouraging review. I appreciate your time and support.
    Wendy
Comment from robyn corum
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Wendy,

I have read several of these entries so far and yours may very well be my favorite. *smile* Certainly, God's glory would be far too wondrous to even consider trying to capture on one canvas - or a thousand.

It's even hard to try to imagine capturing those angels appropriately!

You have the right word count and it looks like you meet the rest of the requirements, too. Thanks so much and good luck!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    Thank you Robyn! What a wonderful encouragement in your kind words!
    Wendy
Comment from royowen
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I remember there is an actual painting of Jesus, painted by a young girl called Akiani Klamarik from a vision, and confirmed by a young boy who went to Heaven, but I know what you mean, how Does one paint glory? beautifully written Wendy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    Thank you very much Roy for your thoughtful words. Much appreciated.
    Wendy
reply by royowen on 08-Feb-2022
    Most welcome Wendy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a great short spiritual dialogue. Especially, the last sentence is just perfect:
His glory is beyond imagining!
So true. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    Thank you very much Kate, for your lovely review and good wishes. Always much appreciated.
    Wendy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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AMEN!!!!!!!! Yes, God's glory is impossible to imagine. As is Heaven. We have some descriptions in the Bible but isn't totally clear. This is where fait comes in. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    Thank you Barbara! What a super review, and I appreciate it a lot, as well as your good wishes.
    Wendy
Comment from Anne Johnston
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"The Son of God? Impossible, His glory is beyond imagining!"
Very well said, Wendy. A great entry for the contest. We feel the Lord with us, but we cannot see Him with our eyes and no one could paint a true picture of Him. Won't it be wonderful when we see Him face to face?

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    Yes, it certainly will be wonderful. Thank you so much for the lovely comments in your review.
    Wendy
reply by Anne Johnston on 08-Feb-2022
    You are welcome, Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
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This twenty-one-word story, Beyond Me, has all the elements required for the challenge, and reminds the readers that God is only limited by our ability to imagine His awesomeness.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    Thank you Bill. Great review, appreciated also.
    Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I am unsure what to say and puzzled as to where they come up with these challenges (21 words-three sentences). But "it is written; let it be done." You crossed their i's and dotted their t's. Good luck.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    Thanks Tom for reviewing. Yes, there is a huge variety of challenges.
    Any way I can improve it that you can see?
    Wendy
reply by Tom Horonzy on 08-Feb-2022
    I wouldn't dare suggest. You're so talented and this genre is new to me.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    Lol. That's fine. (You will find that on this site many people are offended if you give fewer than five stars without any suggestions. Be prepared or some quite sharp responses. It's a bit weird! Means that writers really don't know what reviewers think if they are just reviewing with five stars to get the reward in member money. Doesn't help one's writing to improve.) Lol
reply by Tom Horonzy on 08-Feb-2022
    Do they get more reward for giving a five star? I don't unless it's the best of the list of a contest vote, though if there is a tossup for the best within a contest both could rate the best.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    No, they don't get any more reward for giving five stars, but they avoid the harsh words, and sometimes they won't even review YOUR work if they are seriously annoyed. It's all a bit strange. I've been here for sixteen months now, and there are things that I find difficult to accept. But I am trying to improve my writing! Generally it's not a comparison within the list of entrants. You could give each one five stars and then just vote for the one you prefer, and I think that's what most people do.
    Anyway, I hope you enjoy being on the site!
    Wendy
reply by Tom Horonzy on 08-Feb-2022
    I find I write less because I'm earning points by reviewing. At least that way, I can enter in non-cash contests FREE... more or less.