Final Chess Match in Heaven...
twenty one word prompt12 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
Last day of contest and I have no sixes left. I think this really deserves one. The idea of a chess match is what first drew me in. The truth of the conclusion is creatively written and absolute. Best wishes in the contest, my friend!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Last day of contest and I have no sixes left. I think this really deserves one. The idea of a chess match is what first drew me in. The truth of the conclusion is creatively written and absolute. Best wishes in the contest, my friend!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Cody, you now have 4 votes!
This is definitely a very creative approach to the contest.
God declared his son ( a man ) , King of heaven and earth , but Lucifer wanted that position and rebelled.
He lost and was cast out of heaven.
So now there is a big match going on between God and the Devil and it's being played here on Earth.
The Devil knows he won't win and he know what awaits him ( a lake of fire and brimstone) but he hopes to take as many people as he can from God s light, in the meantime.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Ciao Cody, you now have 4 votes!
This is definitely a very creative approach to the contest.
God declared his son ( a man ) , King of heaven and earth , but Lucifer wanted that position and rebelled.
He lost and was cast out of heaven.
So now there is a big match going on between God and the Devil and it's being played here on Earth.
The Devil knows he won't win and he know what awaits him ( a lake of fire and brimstone) but he hopes to take as many people as he can from God s light, in the meantime.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Oh no one been away for a while. THANK YOU SO MUCH. How cool. Thank you.
Comment from Heather Burroughs
This is great! I enjoy your approach to this. It's written well and is incredibly descriptive. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck with your entry in the contest. Many blessings to you.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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This is great! I enjoy your approach to this. It's written well and is incredibly descriptive. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck with your entry in the contest. Many blessings to you.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you!!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I really like this. It is so different from the usual heaven visitation No Angel's singing! It is clever and so creative.
Why not a chess game to defeat the devil again!
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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I really like this. It is so different from the usual heaven visitation No Angel's singing! It is clever and so creative.
Why not a chess game to defeat the devil again!
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Mary. I'm sorry for not promoting it I thought it was blind. You are great thank you :)
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Your very welcome.. I truly enjoyed your writing.
Mary
Comment from karenina
Totally original take! Hurry! Change your punctuation! Only THREE sentences allowed!
Fix that and I'm betting I'll be back to offer congratulations! So very good.... Clever morph of "checkmate" to Check mate!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Totally original take! Hurry! Change your punctuation! Only THREE sentences allowed!
Fix that and I'm betting I'll be back to offer congratulations! So very good.... Clever morph of "checkmate" to Check mate!
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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You are AMAZING. Thank you. But I'm so so sorry I didn't promote it. I thought it was blind!
Thank you my friend :)
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Rats! If I had any member dollars I'd be rushing over to boost this up. Unfortunately, I've spent them like a crazy woman this week!--Karenina
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You are great thank you so much for your support. You're always so so kind Karenina.
Comment from visionary1234
Hahaha ... I should try my hand at this one, for sure! I liked your taking us out of the usual God Squad realm and transferring us to chess language. Clever touch!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Hahaha ... I should try my hand at this one, for sure! I liked your taking us out of the usual God Squad realm and transferring us to chess language. Clever touch!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it a bit. I thought you'd hate it
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But you don't know if I'm telling the truth, right???? :):):)
Comment from Begin Again
I wrote a post quite similar (30-word spiritual fiction) last month. It so difficult to create the entire setting in so few words. You have the 21 words, but you have four sentences instead of three. Good luck in the contest. Check mate is the closer!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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I wrote a post quite similar (30-word spiritual fiction) last month. It so difficult to create the entire setting in so few words. You have the 21 words, but you have four sentences instead of three. Good luck in the contest. Check mate is the closer!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Carol!
I'm so sorry I thought this was blind! I would d promoted it. You are great, truly thank you.
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoyed your creative story. You probably need to include Heaven in the story, rather than in the heading. I love the double meaning of: "My prince's taken, but you've no king."
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed your creative story. You probably need to include Heaven in the story, rather than in the heading. I love the double meaning of: "My prince's taken, but you've no king."
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you! Btw I'm so sorry I thought this was blind. I didn't promote it! Thank you so much
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I don't think about the payment, i just review what i like.
Comment from Jay Squires
My friend, I'm afraid you've disqualified yourself. The rules state three sentences only. I count four. And you've a lot more than twenty-one syllables. I count 30. Which is a pity because your poem's logically a coup!
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So sorry, Gregory. I was thinking syllables, not words. I still count four sentences, not three. So you may want to combine one. Easy-peasey.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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My friend, I'm afraid you've disqualified yourself. The rules state three sentences only. I count four. And you've a lot more than twenty-one syllables. I count 30. Which is a pity because your poem's logically a coup!
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So sorry, Gregory. I was thinking syllables, not words. I still count four sentences, not three. So you may want to combine one. Easy-peasey.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Oh man oh man I'm so embarrassed. I thought this was BLIND! I didn't even promote it! I would have never done that if I knew. I'm so sorry. Before I even go to the other reviews I had to go to you first. I apologize man.
But THANK YOU!! You actually caught that. I fixed it!
Btw I think I emailed you. I'm sorry if I'm annoying. I'm still figuring it out. But I want to help support!
Thank you again. And please accept my apologies for the non promotion.
Comment from BethShelby
Very nice spiritual fiction. However, you need to have that game taking place somewhere besides Heaven. God can be anywhere he choses, but the Devil got kicked out of Heaven and isn't allowed back in.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Very nice spiritual fiction. However, you need to have that game taking place somewhere besides Heaven. God can be anywhere he choses, but the Devil got kicked out of Heaven and isn't allowed back in.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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You are CORRECT. I wouldn't have, but it was the prompt to inckude that word.
Thank you so much for reading this :)
God bless
