Wish Upon A Star
Was it a dream?15 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
And in part two the police catch the mystery man and he gets done for sexual harassment...
This could quite easily fall under the horror category
Anyway, all done and word count spot on
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Hi there,
And in part two the police catch the mystery man and he gets done for sexual harassment...
This could quite easily fall under the horror category
Anyway, all done and word count spot on
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer, I hope this review finds you well. Conveying a message in seventy words is quite the challenge. I think you executed well. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Hello fellow writer, I hope this review finds you well. Conveying a message in seventy words is quite the challenge. I think you executed well. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol
Comment from RodG
I am impressed with how deftly you SET THE SCENE in this 70-word fantasy. Moonlight and stardust and a dream ripe with Prince Charming's kisses. Then reality or was it? I wonder how many maidens have had such dreams. Rod
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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I am impressed with how deftly you SET THE SCENE in this 70-word fantasy. Moonlight and stardust and a dream ripe with Prince Charming's kisses. Then reality or was it? I wonder how many maidens have had such dreams. Rod
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you for enjoying my fantasy for a moment...just letting go of the everyday and simply swinging on a star. LOL Appreciate the review. Have a great day!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like and have enjoyed the order of taletelling as well words expressed concisely but neatly and vividly in a true fictional exposure with an appropriate climax; you ask readers a question to taste the readers power of comprehension and appreciation of the work in a positive perspective; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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I like and have enjoyed the order of taletelling as well words expressed concisely but neatly and vividly in a true fictional exposure with an appropriate climax; you ask readers a question to taste the readers power of comprehension and appreciation of the work in a positive perspective; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you for stepping into my magical dream world if only for a moment of two. Fantasy is brief but brightens our day.
Appreciate the review and your kindness.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Too bad the challenge was limited to seventy words. I would have like to see where it ended before he sent her back to sleep. My mind is always enflamed with lust. By the way is "stardust" only dust motes floating in air illuminated by moonlight or stars???
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Too bad the challenge was limited to seventy words. I would have like to see where it ended before he sent her back to sleep. My mind is always enflamed with lust. By the way is "stardust" only dust motes floating in air illuminated by moonlight or stars???
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Oh, no way! Stardust is composed of magical fairy dust, mixed with thousands of minute pieces of glimmering gold, and a touch of happiness, love and childhood dreams. LOL
I too wished I had more words to share, but the rules broke my bubble and demanded I reform. LOL
Thank you for the wonderful review.
Blessings for a perfect day!
