Jars
Kyrielle sonnet54 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I enjoy this poem. Definitely it rhymes well...
How many jars could tear-drop fill? This is an emotional question for me. It reminds me of my tears from the day I learned my wife had cancer till the days she passed away. Certainly it can fill a few jars for 7 years of surgery and chemo... When she passed away, I had no more tears but felt relieved for her...
Thanks for sharing such a nice poem.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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I enjoy this poem. Definitely it rhymes well...
How many jars could tear-drop fill? This is an emotional question for me. It reminds me of my tears from the day I learned my wife had cancer till the days she passed away. Certainly it can fill a few jars for 7 years of surgery and chemo... When she passed away, I had no more tears but felt relieved for her...
Thanks for sharing such a nice poem.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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I?m so sorry you lost your wife, it must have been awful. Thanks for these wonder comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your opening and closing lines make a great closing couplet Roy in this Kyrielle poem. Great alliteration with
Hunter hovers like a hawk
A dramatic thought provoking read. Well written, Roy.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Your opening and closing lines make a great closing couplet Roy in this Kyrielle poem. Great alliteration with
Hunter hovers like a hawk
A dramatic thought provoking read. Well written, Roy.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
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Thanks Valda, for these beautiful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Lana Marie
That was a fun poem to read. It really felt poetic. I've never read this type of a poem before. I really like this storyline. I've sometimes wondered how many tears it would take to fill a jar when I have read the story in the Bible about the alabaster jar.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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That was a fun poem to read. It really felt poetic. I've never read this type of a poem before. I really like this storyline. I've sometimes wondered how many tears it would take to fill a jar when I have read the story in the Bible about the alabaster jar.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Lana, for these excellent comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for the notes and poem, Roy.
-It is well written with effective imagery,
rhyme, and repeating lines.
-I like the opening question.
-You offer things like desire, love,
and even the "wind will talk."
-But there is caution with the
repeating like about the wolf.
-I think the lesson is don't overdo
anything, especially those things can
can lead to excess because many tears
will fall and "the wolf doth stalk."
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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-Thanks for the notes and poem, Roy.
-It is well written with effective imagery,
rhyme, and repeating lines.
-I like the opening question.
-You offer things like desire, love,
and even the "wind will talk."
-But there is caution with the
repeating like about the wolf.
-I think the lesson is don't overdo
anything, especially those things can
can lead to excess because many tears
will fall and "the wolf doth stalk."
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks Pam for these empathetic comments, and a great retort, blessings Roy
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You are very welcome, Roy.
Comment from DeboraDyess
Roy, you never disappoint. I didn't catch the wolf reference until you cited the verse out of Matthew. (Feeling a bit thick right now... lol)
This is a beauty. The words flow well, the form fits the poem perfectly. Well done!
Blessings,
D
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Roy, you never disappoint. I didn't catch the wolf reference until you cited the verse out of Matthew. (Feeling a bit thick right now... lol)
This is a beauty. The words flow well, the form fits the poem perfectly. Well done!
Blessings,
D
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks Debora for these empathetic comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Possummagic
Another lovingly crafted and beautifully penned sonnet in the perfect Kyrielle form. The words flow so sofly and create such images that are easy to follow. I loved your imagery also.
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Another lovingly crafted and beautifully penned sonnet in the perfect Kyrielle form. The words flow so sofly and create such images that are easy to follow. I loved your imagery also.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much, for these empathetic comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are as always, most welcome neighbour! PM
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Bless you
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I read and reread the poem to grasp the nuances and hidden meaning. This is a beautifully penned poem with rhyming patterns. . A learning experience for me in knowing the different forms of poetry.
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I read and reread the poem to grasp the nuances and hidden meaning. This is a beautifully penned poem with rhyming patterns. . A learning experience for me in knowing the different forms of poetry.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks Seshardi, for these excellent comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
"How many jars could teardrops fill." The first line is brilliant. It hooks your reader immediately. The wolves stalk - beware the false prophets.
The writing is perfect, beautifully presented as a thoughtful call of the danger that exists.
Thank you for the read.
Mary
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"How many jars could teardrops fill." The first line is brilliant. It hooks your reader immediately. The wolves stalk - beware the false prophets.
The writing is perfect, beautifully presented as a thoughtful call of the danger that exists.
Thank you for the read.
Mary
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks Mary for these excellent comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are certainly welcome.
Comment from Versch
This is a beautifully crafted poem. I love the rhyming patterns. The rhythm flow is fantastic. I have learned many different types of poetry which I have never heard before in my short time here. I have never heard of this one before too. Blessings! Ver
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This is a beautifully crafted poem. I love the rhyming patterns. The rhythm flow is fantastic. I have learned many different types of poetry which I have never heard before in my short time here. I have never heard of this one before too. Blessings! Ver
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks Ver, for these wonderful comments, and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from ESOSTINE
Yet another beautiful piece of poetry from you. dear Roy. The flow and calmness buried in the poem touched my heart to reflect more over the theme. I love the rich imagery therein. Thanks, and please keep them coming. Lol.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Yet another beautiful piece of poetry from you. dear Roy. The flow and calmness buried in the poem touched my heart to reflect more over the theme. I love the rich imagery therein. Thanks, and please keep them coming. Lol.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks, for these excellent comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
