Comment from
Patty Palmer
Your poem about angels is written nicely as a prayer. It says everything just the way you would ask to be guided in your life. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
Thanks for your response.
reply by Patty Palmer on 09-Jan-2022
Comment from
lancellot
This is an interesting poem. I get who the author is speaking to, but only because of the title and the contest. From the body of work alone that is unclear. It doesn't use the word Angel anywhere. Something to consider.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
Thanks for your thoughtful response. I appreciate it.
Comment from
Iza Deleanu
I like your plea:"Guide me through dark places.
Guide me back to light.
Hear my questions.
Hold my hand,
my soul,
me." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
Thanks for reading and responding.