This Little Piggy
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Comment from Wils
I just came across this and wish I'd seen it earlier, definitely would have got my vote. It brings up an image of a very drunk, stumbling pig.
It gave me a laugh.
Geoff
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I just came across this and wish I'd seen it earlier, definitely would have got my vote. It brings up an image of a very drunk, stumbling pig.
It gave me a laugh.
Geoff
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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What a nice surprise! Thank you.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a witty poem with a play on the words wee wee wee. It gives a reason why the pig from the nursery rhyme did that. In the rhyme it probably meant the sound he made not the action inferred in the poem.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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This is a witty poem with a play on the words wee wee wee. It gives a reason why the pig from the nursery rhyme did that. In the rhyme it probably meant the sound he made not the action inferred in the poem.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you. I had fun playing with that one.
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My pleasure. It seemed like you did.
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Comment from Michele Harber
What an adorable story! You actually had me laughing out loud. This is the kind of poem both kids and adults would get a kick out of.
Congratulations on making it to the podium.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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What an adorable story! You actually had me laughing out loud. This is the kind of poem both kids and adults would get a kick out of.
Congratulations on making it to the podium.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much. I wrote it during one of my have fun silly moments.
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Aren't those the best kind of moments???
Comment from Shirley McLain
I enjoyed reading your little pig story. It's a shame he drank so much Pepsi. He may not have had to go wee wee wee all the way home. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed reading your little pig story. It's a shame he drank so much Pepsi. He may not have had to go wee wee wee all the way home. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank you : )
Comment from Kooky Clown
Loved it what a great little poem about a tale so old and so much fun and it also explains a lot as to why the little piggy went wee wee wee all the way home love it .
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Loved it what a great little poem about a tale so old and so much fun and it also explains a lot as to why the little piggy went wee wee wee all the way home love it .
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you made me smile as you put your own special touch on this nursery rhyme and made us all read your inventive words, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Ha ha ha, you made me smile as you put your own special touch on this nursery rhyme and made us all read your inventive words, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you. It was fun to write.
Comment from jaylar
Ha! Good one. It made me laugh. Interesting a surprising take on the old nursey rhyme. I like how it leads up to the ending and then gives it a twist that I did not see coming. Catchy and fun to read.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Ha! Good one. It made me laugh. Interesting a surprising take on the old nursey rhyme. I like how it leads up to the ending and then gives it a twist that I did not see coming. Catchy and fun to read.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I never did like the old nursery rhyme and decided to give it a touch of reality.
Comment from Paul McFarland
I was going to give you a hard time, Joan, until you polished this poem off with a very clever ending. The only difference between Virginia and Maine is the pigs up here drink Moxie.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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I was going to give you a hard time, Joan, until you polished this poem off with a very clever ending. The only difference between Virginia and Maine is the pigs up here drink Moxie.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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lol. Thank you. I'm not so sure pigs in Virginia would be that much different from those in Maine if they only had the chance.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I have to admit that put a big smile on my face on this dull afternoon! lol
It's very well written and a lot of fun. i hope it does well in the competition.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Hi there,
I have to admit that put a big smile on my face on this dull afternoon! lol
It's very well written and a lot of fun. i hope it does well in the competition.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 02-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Thank you. It was fun the have a silly moment.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise narrative poem is excellent in every respect--containing a complete plot and conveying a message in an appealing, clever, entertaining way.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Your ultra-concise narrative poem is excellent in every respect--containing a complete plot and conveying a message in an appealing, clever, entertaining way.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2022
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Thank you. I had fun playing with this one.