Water Rat
Disabled Does Not Mean Unabled6 total reviews
Comment from writer723
This is such lovely writing. It sounds like the young man in this story has set wonderful goals for himself. You have expressed the sentiments of his challenges and accomplishments very well and affected me emotionally. The picture your words painted in my mind helped me to visualize his circumstances and to share his vision for the future. I enjoyed the read and your inclusion of his dedication to achieving his dreams. I also like the nice things that other people said about him. Fantastic job!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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This is such lovely writing. It sounds like the young man in this story has set wonderful goals for himself. You have expressed the sentiments of his challenges and accomplishments very well and affected me emotionally. The picture your words painted in my mind helped me to visualize his circumstances and to share his vision for the future. I enjoyed the read and your inclusion of his dedication to achieving his dreams. I also like the nice things that other people said about him. Fantastic job!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the insightful review.
Comment from Rebel Jim
You go Brandon!!... Quite a good story... Don't see no faults
with it except for the fact that he was armless but could the breast stroke...
He must have had some 'Badass prosthetics'.....
Either way, you go Brandon!!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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You go Brandon!!... Quite a good story... Don't see no faults
with it except for the fact that he was armless but could the breast stroke...
He must have had some 'Badass prosthetics'.....
Either way, you go Brandon!!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
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This wasn't fictional right?...
My compliments!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a story of true grit in the face of adversity and difficulty. Brandon is to be admired for his determination, and you are to be admired for managing to make the story not come out mawkish.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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This is a story of true grit in the face of adversity and difficulty. Brandon is to be admired for his determination, and you are to be admired for managing to make the story not come out mawkish.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Appreciate the review.
Comment from royowen
I've seen an armless man play table tennis, at a hight level at the paralympics, as well as armless swimmers swim seemingly propelled by nothing more than sheer desire to overcome their difficulties, but they regarded it as a challenge not a disability, a fantastic post, errorless. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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I've seen an armless man play table tennis, at a hight level at the paralympics, as well as armless swimmers swim seemingly propelled by nothing more than sheer desire to overcome their difficulties, but they regarded it as a challenge not a disability, a fantastic post, errorless. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Appreciate the insights and the review.
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Well done
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In terms of memories of the youth, you can remembers of your bad and good days, including your days of pride, Brandon Harris was disabled person and that is not unable person to do anything, sometimes spirits and encouragement come from outside; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D.R.)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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In terms of memories of the youth, you can remembers of your bad and good days, including your days of pride, Brandon Harris was disabled person and that is not unable person to do anything, sometimes spirits and encouragement come from outside; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D.R.)
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Whatever.
Comment from Eunice Amero
Brandon was smart and strong. I like him. I love your story. You did a good job. Thank you for sharing. Maybe you can cut out a few Brandons because I felt I was saying them a lot. But maybe I'm wrong. Sorry if I am. Good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Brandon was smart and strong. I like him. I love your story. You did a good job. Thank you for sharing. Maybe you can cut out a few Brandons because I felt I was saying them a lot. But maybe I'm wrong. Sorry if I am. Good luck.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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You are welcome.
