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My Story In A Poem

There is no truth in this post at all. Purely fiction.

15 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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That's brilliant! I can't imagine this is biographical but yes, the childhood of a politician who had learn to pull pranks and lie about it from youth sounds like the right qualifications! Best wishes in the contest. Did the voting happen already? I'm sorry to be late to get to this.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    Actually, I wrote about a boy I remember from high school and he was a real prankster and always in trouble. Most of the pranks were ones he did. I was the goody goody two shoes. If you know what I mean. Really shy and not involved in anything out of the ordinary. I bet he did become a politician...lol.
reply by lyenochka on 06-Jan-2022
    That's funny!! I followed the "goody two shoes" dance, too. Even my high school teachers were shocked I didn't change after college and become more worldly-wise. Lol.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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Well done, Annie. After your first stanza, I thought that what was to follow was not going to be very good. But it was very good. I think you should do quite well in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
    Thank you so much. I appreciate your review and your honesty. Have a Happy New Year.
Comment from damommy
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What a fun poem. I like all the pranks mentioned, especially greasing the bleachers. I can see how being diverse in such tomfoolery would come in handy for a politician, but I don't think they're as much fun as the person in this poem.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
    I had a good time writing this one. It kind of wrote itself actually. I kept thinking of all the pranks the boys in high school used to do and kind of wove them into the story. Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Great story for the Share A Story In A Poem contest and best of wishes in the contest! The poem flows perfectly together throughout the entire piece and the characters interacted nicely together throughout the piece!

I appreciate you sharing this piece with us and may God bless you and your family during this brand New Year;-)

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
    I had a good time writing this one. It kind of wrote itself actually. I kept thinking of all the pranks the boys in high school used to do and kind of wove them into the story. Thanks so much for your review.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 01-Jan-2022
    ;-)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Haha, love the last line, Annie. Your poem was fun to read and review. I like the rhymes and the many examples of pranks. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
    I had a good time writing this one. It kind of wrote itself actually. I kept thinking of all the pranks the boys in high school used to do and kind of wove them into the story. Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from Gee
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Very nicely written.
Yes, that sounds like training for a politician.
greasing the bleachers? OMG
Thanks for sharing. I have been enjoying your work.
I hope to read more.


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
    I had a good time writing this one. It kind of wrote itself actually. I kept thinking of all the pranks the boys in high school used to do and kind of wove them into the story. Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
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This is a fun story to read, in a poetic lilt, Anniedawn. I'm glad you qualified the content at the beginning, but I would have had a hard time believing you would have been such a rebel anyway. Great job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
    I had a good time writing this one. It kind of wrote itself actually. I kept thinking of all the pranks the boys in high school used to do and kind of wove them into the story. Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your made me smile here Annie as Politicians are no more than pranksters and have us all jumping when they speak. A fun post Annie, loving the rhymes too, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
    I had a good time writing this one. It kind of wrote itself actually. I kept thinking of all the pranks the boys in high school used to do and kind of wove them into the story. Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words got me to smile! These words were inviting,
descriptive, daring, and creative. I really liked the last stanza and
liked the career choice! the poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is awesome and compliments these words.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
    I had a good time writing this one. It kind of wrote itself actually. I kept thinking of all the pranks the boys in high school used to do and kind of wove them into the story. Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from Eunice Amero
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Very good poem. I really liked it. You a little bugger when you were young?? LOL So were you put in a well. That would certainly smarten me up. But then you got a good job. Good job and I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
    I had a good time writing this one. It kind of wrote itself actually. I kept thinking of all the pranks the boys in high school used to do and kind of wove them into the story. Thanks so much for your review.
reply by Eunice Amero on 01-Jan-2022
    I didn't think you were a bad girl. Boys are up to their tricks. It was a good idea. Thanks for sharing.