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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "wondering"
poetry

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Comment from Sherry Asbury
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I wish they would just label them Covid 1, 2, 3 ...etc These names make me wanko. Where was its inception? Did some Chinese lab create it? Is God just tired of us and sent a plague to wipe us out. As if being old and creaky and living in poverty isn't enough? We shall see and you have lovely artwork here.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
    Thanks, I appreciate that!






Comment from lancellot
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You make the readers really think about current events. No one really knows how things are going to play out. Are we bein manipulated? I wonder about those things too. You have interesting commentary, but the main problem is that what you have is not poetry. It is not even free verse poetry.

I would suggest, if you do not want to change, simply change your posting section to prose.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
    Thank's for the advice! It helps! Thank's again!
Comment from oliver818
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You are right, it will be interesting. I hope that it just faded away considering it's supposed to be less dangerous than the other versions. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2021