Revenge
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Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
I don't remember Max. Has he been introduced before? (sorry!) The rest was really entertaining. I love that she had swapped the sugar pills - quite resourceful! Thanks!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Carol,
I don't remember Max. Has he been introduced before? (sorry!) The rest was really entertaining. I love that she had swapped the sugar pills - quite resourceful! Thanks!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Max is Sheriff Welcher's brother. He too was childhood friends with Marian and Sam. Can't tell you more because I don't recall which chapter you learn the rest. LOL
Hugs, Carol
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Awesome!
Comment from RShipp
I have enjoyed the spontaneity of 'planning' that seems to be the order of the day for escaping. Often thinking-by-the-seat-of-your-pants is the best their is to do.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I have enjoyed the spontaneity of 'planning' that seems to be the order of the day for escaping. Often thinking-by-the-seat-of-your-pants is the best their is to do.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was amazing! I had my heart in my mouth when I though Charles had come back and somehow found the passageway. Now the war can begin, lets go get them!! Wow! what a great chapter again!! One more to go. :)) Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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That was amazing! I had my heart in my mouth when I though Charles had come back and somehow found the passageway. Now the war can begin, lets go get them!! Wow! what a great chapter again!! One more to go. :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
You're just toying with your audience with Max suddenly showing up when we're sure that Marian would get caught. How in the world did he slip in unnoticed? So glad that Marian has another person on her side!
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though she was sure he would want a repeat of last night. (would he? I thought this should be in the negative since Jaz put up such a fight.)
"ax, how did you find me?" (Max)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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You're just toying with your audience with Max suddenly showing up when we're sure that Marian would get caught. How in the world did he slip in unnoticed? So glad that Marian has another person on her side!
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though she was sure he would want a repeat of last night. (would he? I thought this should be in the negative since Jaz put up such a fight.)
"ax, how did you find me?" (Max)
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much for the comments and support. Sorry I am so far behind but know I truly appreciate you.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
What a twist--Marian and Max. Masterful misdirection when he grabs her--I thought James or Charles was the one. As always, brisk pace and manic action!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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What a twist--Marian and Max. Masterful misdirection when he grabs her--I thought James or Charles was the one. As always, brisk pace and manic action!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Though it sounds like I am complaining because I can't catch up.... well, I guess I am, but it doesn't change how much I appreciate your support and continued encouragement. Thank you as always.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a very interesting and active chapter in your book. Marian was wise to change out her pills. I can't remember Max. I hope he's a good guy as his brother obviously isn't. You are doing a very good job of keeping up the tension and interest in your story.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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This is a very interesting and active chapter in your book. Marian was wise to change out her pills. I can't remember Max. I hope he's a good guy as his brother obviously isn't. You are doing a very good job of keeping up the tension and interest in your story.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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thank you for your kindness and great review. Always, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
Carol, you are sure full of surprises in this story! I hope Max can be trusted, but since Marian has known him from childhood, maybe he's on her side. Another excellent chapter.
I read all the chapter and was about to write the review when our power went out, for two hours!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Carol, you are sure full of surprises in this story! I hope Max can be trusted, but since Marian has known him from childhood, maybe he's on her side. Another excellent chapter.
I read all the chapter and was about to write the review when our power went out, for two hours!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Sending apologies for my tardiness and lots of hugs and love for you and yours for the holidays. I pray that you and your family feel the blessings of the season. As always, I hold you dear to my heart.
Have a great day and may all God's blessings find you.
Always, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Oh, that's a surprise, that Marian loves Max, and he knows his way around in the corridors. She is smart to have exchanged the sedatives with sugar pills earlier. I hope Jaz and the girls are rescued soon. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Oh, that's a surprise, that Marian loves Max, and he knows his way around in the corridors. She is smart to have exchanged the sedatives with sugar pills earlier. I hope Jaz and the girls are rescued soon. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Marian has many secrets... Appreciate the review and support. Always, Carol
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Yes she does! Good chapter!
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm guessing that the probably need a plan before, not after, they rescue the others. But either way, it's time to get something done in a hurry. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I'm guessing that the probably need a plan before, not after, they rescue the others. But either way, it's time to get something done in a hurry. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Though it sounds like I am complaining because I can't catch up.... well, I guess I am, but it doesn't change how much I appreciate your support and continued encouragement. Thank you as always.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
You gave me a fright at first, until I realized that it was Max, and he was on their side. I thought it was going to be all over, for Marian. A great chapter, and the tension still rises as the rescue approaches.
Wendy
Typo: Cavalry, not Calvary
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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You gave me a fright at first, until I realized that it was Max, and he was on their side. I thought it was going to be all over, for Marian. A great chapter, and the tension still rises as the rescue approaches.
Wendy
Typo: Cavalry, not Calvary
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Though it sounds like I am complaining because I can't catch up.... well, I guess I am, but it doesn't change how much I appreciate your support and continued encouragement. Thank you as always.
Hugs, Carol