Revenge
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
As if she would! No one will let her go there without some sort of back up. I'm sure Marion is phoning one of them, and she knows about a meeting taking place there. That will give them a big clue as to what is going on. This is so exciting!!! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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As if she would! No one will let her go there without some sort of back up. I'm sure Marion is phoning one of them, and she knows about a meeting taking place there. That will give them a big clue as to what is going on. This is so exciting!!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you to my greatest cheerleader! Sending my love as always, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
I just knew that he was going to get Allie to come to meet him. He thinks he's going to take Allie for the client he's getting girls for. I don't know how, but I know Garth won't let her go alone. This is getting exciting! Great Job!
Patty
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I just knew that he was going to get Allie to come to meet him. He thinks he's going to take Allie for the client he's getting girls for. I don't know how, but I know Garth won't let her go alone. This is getting exciting! Great Job!
Patty
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I thank you for reading, supporting me and always for your kindness. Without my FanStory family, I am not sure where I would be.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I wish I was invited to enjoy the Italian buffet with the ravioli, sausage, meatballs and antipasto. But since I can only read about it, I'll enjoy the mystery and suspense of the story. Some things are about to be revealed. See you in the next chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I wish I was invited to enjoy the Italian buffet with the ravioli, sausage, meatballs and antipasto. But since I can only read about it, I'll enjoy the mystery and suspense of the story. Some things are about to be revealed. See you in the next chapter.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I thank you for reading, supporting me and always for your kindness. Without my FanStory family, I am not sure where I would be.
Hugs, Carol
The table is set any time you want to join me, Lorraine.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol. This is yet another terrific chapter. I don't know how you do it to post a chapter almost every day. Now, I don't think they will allow her to approach James all alone. Well, I hope not. And meanwhile, Marianne and Cheryl are planning their escape. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Hi Carol. This is yet another terrific chapter. I don't know how you do it to post a chapter almost every day. Now, I don't think they will allow her to approach James all alone. Well, I hope not. And meanwhile, Marianne and Cheryl are planning their escape. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I thank you for reading, supporting me and always for your kindness. Without my FanStory family, I am not sure where I would be.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Oh, my. We are reaching the crescendo. I wouldn't have believed it if I hadn't seen the other story beginning. I'm more than a little nervous for all the players!
A note:
--> Allie screamed into the phone, "If you've hurt her, I'm going--(")
Thanks!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Carol,
Oh, my. We are reaching the crescendo. I wouldn't have believed it if I hadn't seen the other story beginning. I'm more than a little nervous for all the players!
A note:
--> Allie screamed into the phone, "If you've hurt her, I'm going--(")
Thanks!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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It appears I will never catch up on these reviews, but I am trying. As always, I am grateful for your support and encouragement. Thank you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
Fat chance they'll let her go to Francine's alone. Meanwhile back at the ranch, Marianne and Cheryl are plotting their escape while Tiffany is hidden in the nether regions of the house, and are thinking perhaps when James and or, Charles are at Francine's well done again Carol, blessings Roy
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Fat chance they'll let her go to Francine's alone. Meanwhile back at the ranch, Marianne and Cheryl are plotting their escape while Tiffany is hidden in the nether regions of the house, and are thinking perhaps when James and or, Charles are at Francine's well done again Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to see what happens at Francine's. I know it will be big. This story just gets better and better.
He laughed, " You owe me big time. (period needed after 'laughed')
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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I can't wait to see what happens at Francine's. I know it will be big. This story just gets better and better.
He laughed, " You owe me big time. (period needed after 'laughed')
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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The next chapter is setting things up and than the two after that will be filled with action and surprises to, I guess. I hope I don't disappoint.
Hugs, Carol
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I'm sure you won't.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Here I am spending my morning with you, as usual, and being manipulated by your magical touch with words. Now, the fat man has to eat, wondering if it's hunger or dementia. :-)
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Here I am spending my morning with you, as usual, and being manipulated by your magical touch with words. Now, the fat man has to eat, wondering if it's hunger or dementia. :-)
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Here I sit reading through my tears because someone else hit an emotional spot and....what do you know.... my hero comes out of no where and makes me laugh. You are always there when I need you...ESP maybe.
Hugs, Carol
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About every positive thing I ever do is accidental. Not, ESP. But it's nice when it brings a smile. Hugs, Ric
Comment from Judy Lawless
Oh my goodness, Carol, that poor, frightened boy! You did a great job of showing his fear. I wanted to kick Poppa for pretending to shoot him as he left.
So things are beginning to move now. Surely they'll figure out the clues from the phone call and start looking in the right direction. Super chapter, Carol.
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Oh my goodness, Carol, that poor, frightened boy! You did a great job of showing his fear. I wanted to kick Poppa for pretending to shoot him as he left.
So things are beginning to move now. Surely they'll figure out the clues from the phone call and start looking in the right direction. Super chapter, Carol.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
Comment from BethShelby
Allie doesn't seem capable of controlling her emotions and she could do something to get herself into a lot of trouble. It sounds like Garth is going to have trouble with her. She doesn't seem like a person anyone would be able to control.
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Allie doesn't seem capable of controlling her emotions and she could do something to get herself into a lot of trouble. It sounds like Garth is going to have trouble with her. She doesn't seem like a person anyone would be able to control.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021