Snow Crowns
A 2-5-2 of beautiful trees in winter.12 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I love the personification in your poem which immediately forms the impression (supported by the lovely photo) of trees paying homage to Heavenly Father. Although crowned themselves, by winter snow, they still bow to our Lord on high.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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I love the personification in your poem which immediately forms the impression (supported by the lovely photo) of trees paying homage to Heavenly Father. Although crowned themselves, by winter snow, they still bow to our Lord on high.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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You got it. Thank you for the review!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
THANK YOU!
I have been reading diligently through the list of entries for this contest. I was beginning to believe I might have to skip voting entirely! Wow.
I love all the creativity, sure - and some are truly unique, too. But for a poem this small that actually SAYS SOMETHING? That seems to be a lot to ask. *smile* Thanks so much for putting this beautiful praise piece out there.
Obviously, to this moment, you have my vote - there are just a couple more to read. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
THANK YOU!
I have been reading diligently through the list of entries for this contest. I was beginning to believe I might have to skip voting entirely! Wow.
I love all the creativity, sure - and some are truly unique, too. But for a poem this small that actually SAYS SOMETHING? That seems to be a lot to ask. *smile* Thanks so much for putting this beautiful praise piece out there.
Obviously, to this moment, you have my vote - there are just a couple more to read. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this great review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2-5-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
I like the poem about nature and God.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Excellent entry for the 2-5-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
I like the poem about nature and God.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-5-2, Snow Crowns, has the right set up and capture the scene with a fanciful projection of deference to seniority in the forest order. Nice. .......................
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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This 2-5-2, Snow Crowns, has the right set up and capture the scene with a fanciful projection of deference to seniority in the forest order. Nice. .......................
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The winter commands the scene here with heavy snowfall and obeys the season created by God. I enjoyed your ambient write and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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The winter commands the scene here with heavy snowfall and obeys the season created by God. I enjoyed your ambient write and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this review.
Comment from June Sargent
Great imagery captured in a few short lines - trees bowing in deference - with a little bit of help from the heavy wind and snow. Should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Great imagery captured in a few short lines - trees bowing in deference - with a little bit of help from the heavy wind and snow. Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this review.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Quite a spiritual journey for this contest post and compacted into just a few words! Your selected illustration is a good match to your few words.
Best wishes in the contest voting. My guess it will receive many reviews and serious consideration.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Quite a spiritual journey for this contest post and compacted into just a few words! Your selected illustration is a good match to your few words.
Best wishes in the contest voting. My guess it will receive many reviews and serious consideration.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and good presentation.
-You wrote a good
poem to go with it.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes
the branches and relates to
the rest of your poem with
a positive message.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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-Very nice image
and good presentation.
-You wrote a good
poem to go with it.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes
the branches and relates to
the rest of your poem with
a positive message.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from T B Botts
What a beautiful poem and picture. I love the way the snow sets on the trees, I just don't like the snow itself. Pretty stupid of me to live in the north country, but it's not always winter here- just for six months. Well done.
Blessings
Tom
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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What a beautiful poem and picture. I love the way the snow sets on the trees, I just don't like the snow itself. Pretty stupid of me to live in the north country, but it's not always winter here- just for six months. Well done.
Blessings
Tom
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Anne Johnston
" Snow-crowned --
branches bow to His
Highness"
Your words accurately describe the picture you have chosen of a snow-covered world. Beautiful, but best viewed from inside.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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" Snow-crowned --
branches bow to His
Highness"
Your words accurately describe the picture you have chosen of a snow-covered world. Beautiful, but best viewed from inside.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this review.
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You are welcome.
