Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Revenge - Chap 27"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I would have liked to have seen Welcher's face! LOL, that took the smirk off his face, didn't it? Now they the team have a problem, the trouble is, Jaz did murder that man, but didn't realise it was real. Oh what a web you have weaved, my friend. Off to the next part! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I would have liked to have seen Welcher's face! LOL, that took the smirk off his face, didn't it? Now they the team have a problem, the trouble is, Jaz did murder that man, but didn't realise it was real. Oh what a web you have weaved, my friend. Off to the next part! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Actually it was Tiffany dressed and makeup to look like Jaz.... Vito is quite clever and very sick!!
Always, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Ouch, again. Sam better be careful and/or keep her mouth shut. She's gonna get in bigger trouble than she's already in if she keeps mouthing off to THAT guy. NOT a good idea. Blech.
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Carol,
Ouch, again. Sam better be careful and/or keep her mouth shut. She's gonna get in bigger trouble than she's already in if she keeps mouthing off to THAT guy. NOT a good idea. Blech.
And on I go -
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! If Marian's message was heard by the guy who took Sam's phone, they are all in danger. And then Sam got to see the sheriff again and now more trouble is brewing. It sounds pretty scary here. I hope Marian can get out of there.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Oh no! If Marian's message was heard by the guy who took Sam's phone, they are all in danger. And then Sam got to see the sheriff again and now more trouble is brewing. It sounds pretty scary here. I hope Marian can get out of there.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
We're up to Chapter 27, and another mystery pops up. Who's the guy with Samantha's phone, and how did he get it? Who's the guy's boss? For me, the best part of the story is the last line, "Nice seeing you in your uniform, Sheriff." Way to go.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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We're up to Chapter 27, and another mystery pops up. Who's the guy with Samantha's phone, and how did he get it? Who's the guy's boss? For me, the best part of the story is the last line, "Nice seeing you in your uniform, Sheriff." Way to go.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, it's all getting more and more complicated, but the plot and sub plot are very well thought out. But will the plot to frame Jaz work out? It's certainly edge of the seat stuff you're delivering here. I love it. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Hi Carol, it's all getting more and more complicated, but the plot and sub plot are very well thought out. But will the plot to frame Jaz work out? It's certainly edge of the seat stuff you're delivering here. I love it. Ulla xx
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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The stories are about to blend together and things will be clearer and easier to follow...I hope. Thanks so much for the kind review and your time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
The suspense has built up and is making readers bite their nails. How many chapters to go before we chew out our fingers!? Cleverly constructed dialogue with sarcastic remarks. Good ging. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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The suspense has built up and is making readers bite their nails. How many chapters to go before we chew out our fingers!? Cleverly constructed dialogue with sarcastic remarks. Good ging. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the kind review. I am trying to keep the story flowing so I can finish it in the beginning of December when everyone gets so busy. Thank you!
Always, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
A clever and sarcastic remark by Samantha to the sheriff. Allie has to continue to believe in her sister's integrity and realise the trap they are trying to set. Meantime Tiffany also needs to stay safe and in hiding until it's all sorted. Complex but compelling story.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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A clever and sarcastic remark by Samantha to the sheriff. Allie has to continue to believe in her sister's integrity and realise the trap they are trying to set. Meantime Tiffany also needs to stay safe and in hiding until it's all sorted. Complex but compelling story.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Got to get those digs in there every once and awhile. LOL And he certainly deserves it! Thanks for reading and the review.
Always, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Now it's coming together--the final revenge is to frame Jaz via Tiffany--but what about the fingerprints? How many chapters to go? Stunning scene--builds suspense. Clever snide remark about seeing him with his clothes on.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Now it's coming together--the final revenge is to frame Jaz via Tiffany--but what about the fingerprints? How many chapters to go? Stunning scene--builds suspense. Clever snide remark about seeing him with his clothes on.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Go Sam! She represents all of us who has to get those remarks in every once in awhile to remind who has the upper hand. Thanks so much for the review.
Always, Carol
Nothing on Karen yet???
Comment from Gert sherwood
Revenge - Chap 27
Begin Again
Your chapter in the book Revenge.
I had to slow down when I got excited of what was going to take place when the FIB gets involved.
Gert
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Revenge - Chap 27
Begin Again
Your chapter in the book Revenge.
I had to slow down when I got excited of what was going to take place when the FIB gets involved.
Gert
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much Gert for continuing to follow and support my efforts. Always appreciated.
Hugs, Carol
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You are most welcome
Caro
Gert
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Carol
You are so welcome
Gert
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Wow. Jaz got blamed for the death of Drake Lexington. I guess that' on purpose since they have planted the evidence. We all know that Tiffany was tricked to do so. Why was Tiffany on set for such a simple scene? I guess they can't find Jaz.
Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Wow. Jaz got blamed for the death of Drake Lexington. I guess that' on purpose since they have planted the evidence. We all know that Tiffany was tricked to do so. Why was Tiffany on set for such a simple scene? I guess they can't find Jaz.
Well done.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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tiffany believed she was chosen to be an upcoming star in a film...She had no idea about the truth. They made her believe she needed the makeup for the scene... and she's a gullible little starlett willing to do most anything for a shot.
Smiles, Carol