Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Revenge - Chap 22"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
16 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, I'm just so behind keeping up with your story. I have so many other reviews to tend to and then there's my own writing and my life to live,as well. I liked this. Now onto what is next. A hug, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Hi Carol, I'm just so behind keeping up with your story. I have so many other reviews to tend to and then there's my own writing and my life to live,as well. I liked this. Now onto what is next. A hug, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Ulla. Caring for five small children and all the misfortune that goes with it, seems to take up my life as well so I understand. without my writing, I am positive I would not have the strength to keep going...it's the driving force behind me. Thanks so much for continuing to read and follow the story. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm fifty reviews behind after my three-day stint in the hospital, but I'm doing my best to catch up. I apologize for the quickie cookie-cutter review and hopefully things will we be back to normal soon. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I'm fifty reviews behind after my three-day stint in the hospital, but I'm doing my best to catch up. I apologize for the quickie cookie-cutter review and hopefully things will we be back to normal soon. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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One cookie cutter to another.... this is beyond a full time job trying to write, read and respond with thank yous. I send my love and hope you are doing better than me.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from dmt1967
This is another great chapter. This one reads more fluently and the flow is really smooth. I wish I had some sixes left. I enjoyed reading this chapter. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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This is another great chapter. This one reads more fluently and the flow is really smooth. I wish I had some sixes left. I enjoyed reading this chapter. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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thank you so much for your time, review and thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Samantha deals with her past
Your chapter in the book Revenge
Revenge - Chap 22
I found where Samantha tells about her past to me disturbing of how her sister went into the bathroom and took an overdose of ecstasy and whatever else she could find. She didn't make it."
And in your last sentence where Samantha said, 'Two days, James, and you are going down." sounds l intriguing what is going to take place.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Samantha deals with her past
Your chapter in the book Revenge
Revenge - Chap 22
I found where Samantha tells about her past to me disturbing of how her sister went into the bathroom and took an overdose of ecstasy and whatever else she could find. She didn't make it."
And in your last sentence where Samantha said, 'Two days, James, and you are going down." sounds l intriguing what is going to take place.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you Gert for following and enjoying. I hope I continue to peek your interest and intrigue with my story.
Hugs, Carol
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Carol you are so welcome
Gert
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm glad we got the interesting but sad backstory about Samantha and her sister. Grandpa Henry is a very realistic character with authentic emotions and dialog. Your characters demonstrate you knowledge and understanding of human nature, which makes your stories meaningful, believable, and enjoyable. See you in the next episode.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I'm glad we got the interesting but sad backstory about Samantha and her sister. Grandpa Henry is a very realistic character with authentic emotions and dialog. Your characters demonstrate you knowledge and understanding of human nature, which makes your stories meaningful, believable, and enjoyable. See you in the next episode.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you Lorraine for following and enjoying. I hope I continue to peek your interest and intrigue with my story.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Breaxit lexit, lots of back and forth between bad times, bad memories and some good moments with someone who cares about you. Let's see how the bastards gets down for 2 mil:)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Breaxit lexit, lots of back and forth between bad times, bad memories and some good moments with someone who cares about you. Let's see how the bastards gets down for 2 mil:)
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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thank you so much for your time, review and thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from lyenochka
I wonder why Sam is rushing the timing. Would that force James to use Jaz sooner? I think your character portrayal of the grandpa was really believable and hope he can overcome his bitterness.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I wonder why Sam is rushing the timing. Would that force James to use Jaz sooner? I think your character portrayal of the grandpa was really believable and hope he can overcome his bitterness.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I am 172 reviews behind, and I feel terrible about it. I find myself feeling safer dealing with my murderous characters than dealing with my family. I hope everyone understands that I appreciate them very much, but I simply am struggling to keep my head above water. Each person deserves a big thank you for their time and effort... I hope my thanks and hugs will suffice for now.
(((Hugs))) Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Sam must be very cool, calm and collected to be interacting with James at this dangerous level. So much could go wrong. Now it is obvious that Welcher has a significant past which he will do anything to cover. Hope they sort him out fast! Carol, you write so well, so much complexity and so many different threads to weave together. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Sam must be very cool, calm and collected to be interacting with James at this dangerous level. So much could go wrong. Now it is obvious that Welcher has a significant past which he will do anything to cover. Hope they sort him out fast! Carol, you write so well, so much complexity and so many different threads to weave together. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I am 172 reviews behind, and I feel terrible about it. I find myself feeling safer dealing with my murderous characters than dealing with my family. I hope everyone understands that I appreciate them very much, but I simply am struggling to keep my head above water. Each person deserves a big thank you for their time and effort... I hope my thanks and hugs will suffice for now.
(((Hugs))) Carol
Comment from royowen
So, as they say things are coming to a head. Hank and Emmy get a taste of Grandpa Henry's wrath and bitterness, which is a terrible thing to harbour, and poor Samantha is embarrassed by his outraged behaviour. So she gives James his ultimatum, and her anger knows no bounds. I suspect there's some of your pent up anger. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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So, as they say things are coming to a head. Hank and Emmy get a taste of Grandpa Henry's wrath and bitterness, which is a terrible thing to harbour, and poor Samantha is embarrassed by his outraged behaviour. So she gives James his ultimatum, and her anger knows no bounds. I suspect there's some of your pent up anger. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I am 172 reviews behind, and I feel terrible about it. I find myself feeling safer dealing with my murderous characters than dealing with my family. I hope everyone understands that I appreciate them very much, but I simply am struggling to keep my head above water. Each person deserves a big thank you for their time and effort... I hope my thanks and hugs will suffice for now.
(((Hugs))) Carol
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No need to apologise
Comment from BethShelby
So James knew Samantha from her younger years, but she looks different because she has had plastic surgery. I was surprised at her reaction because she seemed so calm, cool and collected with James earlier. She is likely playing a dangerous game
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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So James knew Samantha from her younger years, but she looks different because she has had plastic surgery. I was surprised at her reaction because she seemed so calm, cool and collected with James earlier. She is likely playing a dangerous game
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reading and enjoying my story. It means so much to me. Sorry for the cut and paste. If I can ever get my head on straight it will be a miracle. Hugs, Carol