Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Football Chapter 33 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
27 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm fifty reviews behind after my three-day stint in the hospital, but I'm doing my best to catch up. I apologize for the quickie cookie-cutter review and hopefully things will we be back to normal soon. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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I'm fifty reviews behind after my three-day stint in the hospital, but I'm doing my best to catch up. I apologize for the quickie cookie-cutter review and hopefully things will we be back to normal soon. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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Praying.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, I read in your author's notes that your wrist had been broken and I am sure sad I missed this before but now that I am aware of your fractured hand it is no wonder you have had difficulty writing this story! I am aware also that this story isn't about football yet in Texas where the story is placed, it is a big deal for sure! I hope your injury heals in a timely fashion, Mrs. Wilkey! You will be in my thoughts and prayers, love came to you from all your friends here on FS so I am now one of them!
Take good care of yourself,
Jesse
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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Wow, I read in your author's notes that your wrist had been broken and I am sure sad I missed this before but now that I am aware of your fractured hand it is no wonder you have had difficulty writing this story! I am aware also that this story isn't about football yet in Texas where the story is placed, it is a big deal for sure! I hope your injury heals in a timely fashion, Mrs. Wilkey! You will be in my thoughts and prayers, love came to you from all your friends here on FS so I am now one of them!
Take good care of yourself,
Jesse
Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-It is a nice bouquet, barbara, and
I am glad your wrist is doing better,
and typing is easier.
-This was a good chapter as Mr. Ivory
seemed to push himself on Katherine.
-Not only that, but he was in a
public school and was totally out of line.
-I'm glad Mr. Edwards and Gabe were
paying attention.
-I was surprised to hear that a
lump had been found, and Katherine
will have an ultrasound. On the
positive side, her doctor didn't
think it was going to be a problem.
-You did a good job with the logistics
of figuring out how everyone was
going to get to the game and
practice, and included Reggie, too!
-I hope the storm isn't a really bad one!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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-It is a nice bouquet, barbara, and
I am glad your wrist is doing better,
and typing is easier.
-This was a good chapter as Mr. Ivory
seemed to push himself on Katherine.
-Not only that, but he was in a
public school and was totally out of line.
-I'm glad Mr. Edwards and Gabe were
paying attention.
-I was surprised to hear that a
lump had been found, and Katherine
will have an ultrasound. On the
positive side, her doctor didn't
think it was going to be a problem.
-You did a good job with the logistics
of figuring out how everyone was
going to get to the game and
practice, and included Reggie, too!
-I hope the storm isn't a really bad one!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You are welcome.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm wondering why this guy, Melton Ivory, is being so presistant after she told him she was in a committed relationship. Now, she possible has a problem with a lump in her breast. I would probably keep it under wraps until and I knew more as well. Still, I'm sure Gabriel would feel he should be told, so he could share her concern. I'm always looking forward to more. I'm glad your fingers are moving again.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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I'm wondering why this guy, Melton Ivory, is being so presistant after she told him she was in a committed relationship. Now, she possible has a problem with a lump in her breast. I would probably keep it under wraps until and I knew more as well. Still, I'm sure Gabriel would feel he should be told, so he could share her concern. I'm always looking forward to more. I'm glad your fingers are moving again.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amahra
Oh, no--with everything she has to put up with, can't admit relationship with Gab, dealing with in-laws, avoiding Melton's advances, now a lump in her breast? You've written a strong woman, here, Barbara. Good chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Oh, no--with everything she has to put up with, can't admit relationship with Gab, dealing with in-laws, avoiding Melton's advances, now a lump in her breast? You've written a strong woman, here, Barbara. Good chapter.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Excellent chapter, Barbara. I didn't like that pushy man, I wondered if he has something to do with the in-laws or Frost. There was something most definitely wrong with him.
I hope it's not breast cancer, that could cause lots of problems, not least to Katherine herself. Well done, my friend, very enjoyable read. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Excellent chapter, Barbara. I didn't like that pushy man, I wondered if he has something to do with the in-laws or Frost. There was something most definitely wrong with him.
I hope it's not breast cancer, that could cause lots of problems, not least to Katherine herself. Well done, my friend, very enjoyable read. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review. Ps I keep forgetting to tell you. Your book arrived and I love it.
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Aw, thank you, Barbara! I've sold quite a few copies now. Not going to be a millionaire but, a poundaire is better than nothing!! Lol. Just know my book is in peoples homes around the world is a wonderful feeling. I've got a couple of your books that you published a few years ago. I'll get this one when it's published. xxx
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
He kissed her. "I'm not interested in you; I'm in love with you.' I love romantic stories against all odds. They are more exciting that way. I adore your writing Barbara and you never fail to entertain me with you fabulous writing. This is superb and as usual I cannot wait to find out what happens next. I hope your wrist heals up soon. All my love and best wishes Meia xx
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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He kissed her. "I'm not interested in you; I'm in love with you.' I love romantic stories against all odds. They are more exciting that way. I adore your writing Barbara and you never fail to entertain me with you fabulous writing. This is superb and as usual I cannot wait to find out what happens next. I hope your wrist heals up soon. All my love and best wishes Meia xx
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement and the well wishes.
Comment from Ben Colder
Good write. Enjoyed every line. Glad to hear your doctors' report was good and things are mending well. An answer to prayer. My blessings to you, Barb.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Good write. Enjoyed every line. Glad to hear your doctors' report was good and things are mending well. An answer to prayer. My blessings to you, Barb.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
You have introduced a real problem here .I hope the lump is benign and she would talk about it frankly with Gabe .Otherwise there is going to be a trust issue..
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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You have introduced a real problem here .I hope the lump is benign and she would talk about it frankly with Gabe .Otherwise there is going to be a trust issue..
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Lovely piece of Romance Fiction in continuation having impressive as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning up to the "Good Night".., And beautifully depicting its contents.
"Extra Pounds" episode is particularly noteworthy.
Flawless, and Interesting!
[ Wishing you get well soon! ]
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Lovely piece of Romance Fiction in continuation having impressive as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning up to the "Good Night".., And beautifully depicting its contents.
"Extra Pounds" episode is particularly noteworthy.
Flawless, and Interesting!
[ Wishing you get well soon! ]
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Barbara.Wilkey, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP