Revenge
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21 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
How on earth did I get this far behind?? I'm gonna catch up, of course - but - wow. I'm so disappointed in myself. We've had a lot going on. Lost two precious members of my family. That's part of it.
Anyway, this is still intriguing and captivating. Moving on-
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Carol,
How on earth did I get this far behind?? I'm gonna catch up, of course - but - wow. I'm so disappointed in myself. We've had a lot going on. Lost two precious members of my family. That's part of it.
Anyway, this is still intriguing and captivating. Moving on-
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, it's a great chapter and what I liked about it is that it's catching up with a bit of the back story. It's important sometimes to slow things down, before it goes full speed ahead one again. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Hi Carol, it's a great chapter and what I liked about it is that it's catching up with a bit of the back story. It's important sometimes to slow things down, before it goes full speed ahead one again. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Ulla. I so appreciate your time, review and thoughts.
Have a great day!
Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is another great episode. I especially enjoyed the opening description of the beach and squabbling seagulls. I could almost feel the breeze. I've been waiting for someone to view Henry's pictures. I've vacationed on
St. Simon Island, and vividly recall your initial description. After the pictures have been seen, I suspect there will be some explosions. Great!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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This is another great episode. I especially enjoyed the opening description of the beach and squabbling seagulls. I could almost feel the breeze. I've been waiting for someone to view Henry's pictures. I've vacationed on
St. Simon Island, and vividly recall your initial description. After the pictures have been seen, I suspect there will be some explosions. Great!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reading and enjoying my story. It means so much to me. Sorry for the cut and paste. If I can ever get my head on straight it will be a miracle. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Good chapter. Your writing is so memorable that I still remember the episode when Henri shot the pictures at the bonfire, and I've read several books and more than a hundred submissions at Fanstory since then. Very good writing.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Good chapter. Your writing is so memorable that I still remember the episode when Henri shot the pictures at the bonfire, and I've read several books and more than a hundred submissions at Fanstory since then. Very good writing.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I am flattered that you have read so many chapters in a row and thrilled you are enjoying them. Thank you so much!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely setting you created, Carol, I was there with them looking out at the sea. Now Sam has been introduced to Emmy and Hank, let's hope Gramps will show the pictures to them. Wonderful part, my friend! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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What a lovely setting you created, Carol, I was there with them looking out at the sea. Now Sam has been introduced to Emmy and Hank, let's hope Gramps will show the pictures to them. Wonderful part, my friend! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you, sweetie!
Comment from Patty Palmer
This chapter filled in a few blanks that I had about this and that. Hank and Emmy are sitting waiting
on Samantha on the deck at the Beach House. They will go with Samantha to view the pictures that her grandfather took the night of the bonfire. I hope the pictures will help.
(((HUGS)))
Patty
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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This chapter filled in a few blanks that I had about this and that. Hank and Emmy are sitting waiting
on Samantha on the deck at the Beach House. They will go with Samantha to view the pictures that her grandfather took the night of the bonfire. I hope the pictures will help.
(((HUGS)))
Patty
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I am flattered that you have continued to read and follow the story. So thrilled you are enjoying them. Thank you so much!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good information in this chapter, catching us up a bit on backstory. I'd suggest adding a dialogue tag here and there to help the reader know who's speaking, since Emmy must be adding a line or two. Good chapter. Blessings.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Good information in this chapter, catching us up a bit on backstory. I'd suggest adding a dialogue tag here and there to help the reader know who's speaking, since Emmy must be adding a line or two. Good chapter. Blessings.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Now theat Samantha has met Hank and Emmy I guess the next step will be to convince her grandfather to show the picture that he took on the beach that night. I'm curious sas to what happened to Smaantha's sister and why the grandfather believes the sheriff is somehow responsible.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Now theat Samantha has met Hank and Emmy I guess the next step will be to convince her grandfather to show the picture that he took on the beach that night. I'm curious sas to what happened to Smaantha's sister and why the grandfather believes the sheriff is somehow responsible.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Sorry, I once again read this out of order. I seem to have that problem and for some reason I'm unable to put a stop to it. I try to check and see if there's any previous PM's and somehow missed this one.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Sorry, I once again read this out of order. I seem to have that problem and for some reason I'm unable to put a stop to it. I try to check and see if there's any previous PM's and somehow missed this one.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
"Something to do with my sister and me," I'm thinking might be a clue, but now for figuring why that clue was given. And of course, it could be my wondering mind playing tricks on me. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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"Something to do with my sister and me," I'm thinking might be a clue, but now for figuring why that clue was given. And of course, it could be my wondering mind playing tricks on me. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol