Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is such a sweet entry about first kisses and how you might miss out. I'm sure that it's happened many times, just as I'm sure that there have been many first kisses on first dates. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

The first kiss to the first miss always is remembered because of having so much attachment with your partner or we humans always remember our first step that is why our first kiss always be short but amazing. I enjoyed your romantic poetry. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Thanks Seshadri. I guess it was short. It was barely a henpeck.

Comment from Kooky Clown

Excellent

I loved this it is short and to the point as it says you should take care on the first date and especially no hanky panky if you want it to last and get that first kiss. Kooky.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Thanks, Kooky. First dates are important. You never can tell. You may have met the right one.

Comment from Frances Jean

Excellent

Ah yes, it's always hit and miss isn't it! I really enjoyed your poem with its perfect end rhyming and vivid imagery. The picture accompanying it is gorgeous! It reminds me of when I was four and my brother's best friend Ian and I were caught kissing under the apple tree! Cute as... Franky

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Thanks, Franky???

It seems that that first kiss
Is always hit or miss.

reply by Frances Jean on 07-Nov-2021

Yes, I've been called Franky for many, many years

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

'First Miss', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Thanks, Duchess, for the review and kind words.

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 07-Nov-2021

You're very welcome!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

To kiss? Or not to kiss? That is the question ... always awkward in our day and probably still awkward - for some at least! A sweet entry for the contest, and I send god wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Thanks, Wendy, for the good wishes.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sweet write about kissing and how much fun it can be, a passionate kiss is a very intimate and loving act of love and kindness, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Thanks, Dolly. Kisses for you.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

What a happy little post. Well done.
Sometimes we need works such as this. A smile is worth every moment.
Bravo.
God luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Thanks for the review. A kiss is worth a thousand words, or something like that.

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

How very charming. I enjoyed this. Your rhyming is perfection.
What I think what I like most about it is the audience you intended it for as a piece of first-date advice.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021

Thanks, Mary. It was such a long time ago, I can't remember my first kiss.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

Oh, wow. I hope not! That would be kinda sad, wouldn't it? I am sure most girls - seeing as how they've accepted the date in the first place, which means they must like you a little, right? - are probably hoping for a kiss. *smile* Weird situations that can be so awkward! hahaha

Thanks!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021

Thanks, Robyn.

If that first date is not too great,
First kiss comes on the second date.