Revenge
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Comment from lancellot
I wonder where Samantha really went and what she was doing. I don't think a garden would hold her interest more than a second. A well written chapter. I like the word play, the surprise and the competition between the women and James. May the cleverest win.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I wonder where Samantha really went and what she was doing. I don't think a garden would hold her interest more than a second. A well written chapter. I like the word play, the surprise and the competition between the women and James. May the cleverest win.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from dmt1967
Smiling, James strummed his pen against the desk for a moment(, rolled his eyes upward as if he was studying the ceiling, and then responded,) This is too much information. (and rolled his eyes.) This is ample as most people roll their eyes up and the dialogue shows his response.
Another great chapter and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Smiling, James strummed his pen against the desk for a moment(, rolled his eyes upward as if he was studying the ceiling, and then responded,) This is too much information. (and rolled his eyes.) This is ample as most people roll their eyes up and the dialogue shows his response.
Another great chapter and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Hmm. This is a very interesting character. Is Samantha one of the FBI team who's very good at playing a role? Or is she just a dangerous woman? Seems like Charles may have fallen for her. It's good that Lady Marian likes her. Or did Lady Marian hire her? So many questions!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Hmm. This is a very interesting character. Is Samantha one of the FBI team who's very good at playing a role? Or is she just a dangerous woman? Seems like Charles may have fallen for her. It's good that Lady Marian likes her. Or did Lady Marian hire her? So many questions!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I loved the smooth way Samantha played her hand, first with Charles, then Lady Marian and then with James. Unfortunately, she set the stage to be challenged by James. I can't wait to see where this is going, and hope Sam is a fit opponent. See you in Chapter 14.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I loved the smooth way Samantha played her hand, first with Charles, then Lady Marian and then with James. Unfortunately, she set the stage to be challenged by James. I can't wait to see where this is going, and hope Sam is a fit opponent. See you in Chapter 14.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
The meeting between Samantha Withers and Marian was a very interesting one, with her and Marian having an interesting verbal battle, and with James in the fray, and fascinating go between. You're building this story very nicely Carol, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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The meeting between Samantha Withers and Marian was a very interesting one, with her and Marian having an interesting verbal battle, and with James in the fray, and fascinating go between. You're building this story very nicely Carol, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
Oh but "Sam"---aka " Please call me Samantha"-- is a finely written character! I could see her mannerisms, hear her sultry, suggestive voice... Sense the deceit behind the smile...
Things are getting interesting! Where is THIS path going to take us?
Oops Marian morphed into Marion again! Go see! (smile)
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Oh but "Sam"---aka " Please call me Samantha"-- is a finely written character! I could see her mannerisms, hear her sultry, suggestive voice... Sense the deceit behind the smile...
Things are getting interesting! Where is THIS path going to take us?
Oops Marian morphed into Marion again! Go see! (smile)
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Now who might Samantha Withers be? And what is she up to. And does Lady Marian really have dementia or is she trying to outwit her husband? Where do all these fit in with the bigger plot? I ask myself so many questions. Fascinating story, well written, enough complexity to challenge our detective instincts but not overwhelm.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Now who might Samantha Withers be? And what is she up to. And does Lady Marian really have dementia or is she trying to outwit her husband? Where do all these fit in with the bigger plot? I ask myself so many questions. Fascinating story, well written, enough complexity to challenge our detective instincts but not overwhelm.
Wendy
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good chapter, with some new characters. I'm glad you have posted a list with each chapter. Wondering what Samantha is up to. I'm sure we'll find out soon. Have a blessed day. Carol
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Good chapter, with some new characters. I'm glad you have posted a list with each chapter. Wondering what Samantha is up to. I'm sure we'll find out soon. Have a blessed day. Carol
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Brilliant! I love how Marian took over and left James to it, he's not at all happy about it though. LOL. Sam did well, I liked how she told James he could call her Samantha! LOL. This was a really fun part, Carol, I loved seeing the women taking charge, especially knowing James is conning Marian. I wonder if she really does have dementia, or is she playing her own game, she is certainly enjoying playing with James. Love it, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Brilliant! I love how Marian took over and left James to it, he's not at all happy about it though. LOL. Sam did well, I liked how she told James he could call her Samantha! LOL. This was a really fun part, Carol, I loved seeing the women taking charge, especially knowing James is conning Marian. I wonder if she really does have dementia, or is she playing her own game, she is certainly enjoying playing with James. Love it, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Oh thank you...thank you...thank you. I was so afraid people might get turned off by the topic...which is really just a cover for what's really happening. The women are drawing Vito into their web (because they have good reason) but he doesn't know it. He thinks he has his life planned out, but will soon learn someone else has the upper hand. Thank you so much.
Always loving you and sending a smile and hug, Carol
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I think you are doing amazingly well, my dear friend. You've so much stress in your life, that you can also write this amazing story through it all, is a testament to your talented ability. Copy and paste replies, if it means you can write your chapters, everyone will understand. Love you lots, my friend. xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It appears Samantha is playing a dangerous game. I wonder is she realizes how dangerous James is. Also in narrative you should use full names - Samantha. I do like this plot.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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It appears Samantha is playing a dangerous game. I wonder is she realizes how dangerous James is. Also in narrative you should use full names - Samantha. I do like this plot.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol