Contest Entry and Winners
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "It's A Serious Case of Whodunit "Short Stories
25 total reviews
Comment from Annmuma
The story made me smile1. An excellent illustration of how every situation and every story has two side from which it can be viewed ... and it seems as if there is always someone or something on which we can our own misdeeds! Good luck in the contest. You go my vote! ann
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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The story made me smile1. An excellent illustration of how every situation and every story has two side from which it can be viewed ... and it seems as if there is always someone or something on which we can our own misdeeds! Good luck in the contest. You go my vote! ann
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Oh how awesome! I am flattered that you enjoyed it and I thank you so very much. I think between all my kids and grandkids, I've heard just about every excuse as to why their homework is missing. LOL
Hugs, Carol
Comment from dmt1967
This is a funny story and I liked the way it went from good to bad. It was like two stories in one. Good luck in the contest. This story should do well and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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This is a funny story and I liked the way it went from good to bad. It was like two stories in one. Good luck in the contest. This story should do well and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Hello - and thank you for reading and your kind review. As always, I am running far behind because life keeps dragging me down.
Take care, Carol
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a cute story and I enjoyed reading it. I've never written one these 'fortunately/unfortunately stories and I must try it sometime; I've heard many excuses for not getting homework finished, but none of my students ever said that their dog had eaten it. One student said his sister had flushed his homework down the commode but when asked, she denied it quite vehemently. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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This is a cute story and I enjoyed reading it. I've never written one these 'fortunately/unfortunately stories and I must try it sometime; I've heard many excuses for not getting homework finished, but none of my students ever said that their dog had eaten it. One student said his sister had flushed his homework down the commode but when asked, she denied it quite vehemently. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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My little shih tzu grabs any paper that falls to the floor and runs under the dining room table with it. My grandchildren are always chasing him. He thinks its a game I guess.
Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I enjoyed reading this entry for the - Fortunately - contest.
Fortunately, it is lighthearted and entertaining.
Unfortunately, I have to live a similar life with my teenager not
doing homework on time and being reminded to set the dinner table.
The joys of parenthood and adolescence.
Thank you for sharing the amusing story.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I enjoyed reading this entry for the - Fortunately - contest.
Fortunately, it is lighthearted and entertaining.
Unfortunately, I have to live a similar life with my teenager not
doing homework on time and being reminded to set the dinner table.
The joys of parenthood and adolescence.
Thank you for sharing the amusing story.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Hello, girl friend... I remembered the days of teenagers and hoping they did what was expected of them, but learning our wavelengths didn't run together. And Snickers, my shih tzu, claims all paper that falls on the floor and runs away with it... He thinks it is a game and my granddaughters are always chasing him.
Love ya, Carol
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Hey Carol, sounds like things get better when the adolescent grows up and has kids of their own so that those grandchildren can occupy the pet child(ren). I now see light at the end of the tunnel.
Now it?s different wavelengths and era? too many distractions with over stimulation of environment and technology but that is another matter. The joys of parenting in the 21st century. ~DD🌸x
Comment from karenina
Fortunately you totally got the hang of this contest theme... Unfortunately, I could never manage to write a piece with as much wit... Fortunately Matthew had a dog...
Unfortunately Max, the dog, got blamed!
Cute!
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Fortunately you totally got the hang of this contest theme... Unfortunately, I could never manage to write a piece with as much wit... Fortunately Matthew had a dog...
Unfortunately Max, the dog, got blamed!
Cute!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Yes, thought of my son and then my dog who always steals every piece of paper that lands on the floor. Thus the story! thanks for stopping by to leave a review.
Have a great day! Hugs, Carol
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My son blamed our dog all the time when he didn't do his homework! The problem was...we did NOT have one! (Giggle)--Karenina
Karenina
Comment from lyenochka
This is an enjoyable entry to this contest challenge. But who's Max? It wasn't the dog? Was Max the cat? Sounds like a typical household and hoping my grandson doesn't blame their cat. Lol. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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This is an enjoyable entry to this contest challenge. But who's Max? It wasn't the dog? Was Max the cat? Sounds like a typical household and hoping my grandson doesn't blame their cat. Lol. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Max was in the picture with the note I didn't do it! My pup steals every piece of paper that falls on the floor and runs away with it. The grandchildren chase him...it's a game.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I think you did a good job with this piece. I think the premise of the competition is quite uninspiring but this work flows well and you managed a full story with it. lol
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Hi there,
I think you did a good job with this piece. I think the premise of the competition is quite uninspiring but this work flows well and you managed a full story with it. lol
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I agree the competition didn't leave any room for a true murder mystery, but it was frivolous and fun for a few minutes. Thank you for the review.
Hugs and have a great day! Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
You've chosen an excellent theme for this contest, Carol. I don't think you could get the word (or variations of) Fortunately in many more times. I love the humour. Poor Max. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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You've chosen an excellent theme for this contest, Carol. I don't think you could get the word (or variations of) Fortunately in many more times. I love the humour. Poor Max. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Sorry for my long delay in thanking you for your review. Life's dragging me down, but I am struggling to get through it.
Thanks for reading and for the review. I appreciate it very much.
Hugs, Carol
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Not a problem, Carol. I know it?s your writing that keeps you here and helps you get through your days.
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Thanks! That means more than you will ever know.
Comment from Ulla
Aw, I see, now I get it. It's a fortunately contest entry. Then I understand what I'm reading. very well done and well responding to the challenge. I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Aw, I see, now I get it. It's a fortunately contest entry. Then I understand what I'm reading. very well done and well responding to the challenge. I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Sorry for my long delay in thanking you for your review. Life's dragging me down, but I am struggling to get through it.
Thanks for reading and for the review. I appreciate it very much.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Susan Newell
You have done a good job of balancing fortune and misfortune. I know my dogs had a knack for chewing on things I valued when I hurt their feelings by going to work. I suspect some homework somewhere has actually been chewed up by a dog.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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You have done a good job of balancing fortune and misfortune. I know my dogs had a knack for chewing on things I valued when I hurt their feelings by going to work. I suspect some homework somewhere has actually been chewed up by a dog.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Sorry for my long delay in thanking you for your review. Life's dragging me down, but I am struggling to get through it.
Thanks for reading and for the review. I appreciate it very much.
Hugs, Carol
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You are very welcome. FS is still off and on. :-(
