One night only
It was not to be8 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Isn't that the way sometimes?! Such a promising beginning but then the disappointment of no follow-up. Short, but engaging. Sending good wishes to you for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Isn't that the way sometimes?! Such a promising beginning but then the disappointment of no follow-up. Short, but engaging. Sending good wishes to you for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Many thanks.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like the rhyming in your poem. It is very short and to the point. I guess dancing up a storm did not meet the standards for another date. It is a romantic poem which ended not great.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Like the rhyming in your poem. It is very short and to the point. I guess dancing up a storm did not meet the standards for another date. It is a romantic poem which ended not great.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Many thanks.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Are you sure I didn't call, y'all? I called, left a nice message and didn't hear back. Thought you had hooked up with some yankee boy. Sorry it didn't work out.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Are you sure I didn't call, y'all? I called, left a nice message and didn't hear back. Thought you had hooked up with some yankee boy. Sorry it didn't work out.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Ha ha. Thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A one night stand of fun and entertainment never to be repeated but stays in the memory forever, a fun write filled with fun for just one night, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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A one night stand of fun and entertainment never to be repeated but stays in the memory forever, a fun write filled with fun for just one night, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was fun and humorous. Your last stanza put a big smile on my face. Excellent rhyming and meter.
You two had a ball but he didn't call (lol). Oh, those mean guys. They can turn a girl's head and then disappear.
Great creative imagery, visuals and presentation.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This was fun and humorous. Your last stanza put a big smile on my face. Excellent rhyming and meter.
You two had a ball but he didn't call (lol). Oh, those mean guys. They can turn a girl's head and then disappear.
Great creative imagery, visuals and presentation.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a fun poem. I like the rhyme and rhythm. I can see couples spinning around the dance floor. I think I know that guy. I imagine all women have met him at least once. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This is a fun poem. I like the rhyme and rhythm. I can see couples spinning around the dance floor. I think I know that guy. I imagine all women have met him at least once. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thanks Mary
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You are welcome.
Comment from kahpot
One night only dates really make us wonder if it is a good or bad thing, and knowing we will never know can be quite frustrating, love the rhyme throughout, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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One night only dates really make us wonder if it is a good or bad thing, and knowing we will never know can be quite frustrating, love the rhyme throughout, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, One Night Only, presented with two uni-rhymed quatrains, recalls the Paul whom many may have pawed, but who never saw a second date with y'all.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This poem, One Night Only, presented with two uni-rhymed quatrains, recalls the Paul whom many may have pawed, but who never saw a second date with y'all.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Nice one. Thanks Bill