Tribute to Crzypntr.
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Comment from karenina
A touching tribute to a poet I did not have the good fortune to know... I have read his final poem and the notice of his passing by his daughter, Amber. Dune said "No Man is an Island."-- Never truer than when we lose a kindred spirit writer! Your tribute is beautiful.
I will familiarize myself with some of his work tomorrow and pray I am able to salute him in his memorial book, in any way close to how gently you have done so.
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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A touching tribute to a poet I did not have the good fortune to know... I have read his final poem and the notice of his passing by his daughter, Amber. Dune said "No Man is an Island."-- Never truer than when we lose a kindred spirit writer! Your tribute is beautiful.
I will familiarize myself with some of his work tomorrow and pray I am able to salute him in his memorial book, in any way close to how gently you have done so.
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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You are such a kind soul. Thank you. Hope you are doing well?
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Hanging in, thanks. Surgery 11/11---hate waiting but alas! (covid delays!)---Karenina
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Hi Robyn, this is a beautiful tribute from you and very deserved from what you say. Sadly I missed his work. I did,however, read his last poem thanks to you. You also chose great artwork. A big hug, Giddy
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Hi Robyn, this is a beautiful tribute from you and very deserved from what you say. Sadly I missed his work. I did,however, read his last poem thanks to you. You also chose great artwork. A big hug, Giddy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Giddy. You are so sweet!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Robyn.
Your tribute poem to August is very well written. I commend you for submitting the work to commemorate his passing. It is an excellent contribution to the book. I did not know him.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Hello Robyn.
Your tribute poem to August is very well written. I commend you for submitting the work to commemorate his passing. It is an excellent contribution to the book. I did not know him.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Robert!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Stars, does a nice job of acknowledging that those who have departed, in this case CRZYPNTER, will be distant, but still connected to us.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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This poem, Stars, does a nice job of acknowledging that those who have departed, in this case CRZYPNTER, will be distant, but still connected to us.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Bill!
Comment from pookietoo
Lovely and very nice rhyming job. He was a great poet. Thanks for sharing this poem. I enjoyed reading it. Best wishes to you and keep smiling. :) Keep up the great poetry writing.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Lovely and very nice rhyming job. He was a great poet. Thanks for sharing this poem. I enjoyed reading it. Best wishes to you and keep smiling. :) Keep up the great poetry writing.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you bunches!
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You are welcome
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
A fine addition to the book--kudos for attribution and for including his stunning poem--a double tribute! You did a great job incorporating selected words.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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A fine addition to the book--kudos for attribution and for including his stunning poem--a double tribute! You did a great job incorporating selected words.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from aryr
You have a great idea, Robyn. I really appreciated that you posted his poem. Yours was very touching and really impacted his words. He will indeed be missed.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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You have a great idea, Robyn. I really appreciated that you posted his poem. Yours was very touching and really impacted his words. He will indeed be missed.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Alie. He was a kind man and will be missed.
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You are so very welcome, Robyn.
Comment from judiverse
I am not familiar with the poems of crzpynter, but I'm sorry to hear of his passing. Your poem in tribute to him is really beautiful. Great alliteration with "dazzling, dancing." Mourning tears etch wrinkles is a beautiful line. It's a very beautiful and moving poem. judi
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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I am not familiar with the poems of crzpynter, but I'm sorry to hear of his passing. Your poem in tribute to him is really beautiful. Great alliteration with "dazzling, dancing." Mourning tears etch wrinkles is a beautiful line. It's a very beautiful and moving poem. judi
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Judi. I hope it offers some comfort to the family.
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You're welcome. I also saw a poem from Roy Owens about him. judi
Comment from rama devi
RIP and condolences, dear. This is poignant and inspiring. I love the musicality read aloud and the imagery. Favorite phrasing:
dazzling, dancing glimmers
Great rhymes and slant rhymes--especially thwart and heart!
I remember him, but only vaguely.
Beautiful tribute.
Hugs,
rd
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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RIP and condolences, dear. This is poignant and inspiring. I love the musicality read aloud and the imagery. Favorite phrasing:
dazzling, dancing glimmers
Great rhymes and slant rhymes--especially thwart and heart!
I remember him, but only vaguely.
Beautiful tribute.
Hugs,
rd
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you bunches, friend. Good to see you!
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Thank you, dear. Blessings!
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Comment from Sherry Asbury
Another star gone from the sky of Fan Story, but a bright star in the heavens smiling down at us. You did a wonderful job with this tribute dear one - thank you for honoring this poet!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Another star gone from the sky of Fan Story, but a bright star in the heavens smiling down at us. You did a wonderful job with this tribute dear one - thank you for honoring this poet!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Sherry.
