Comment from pharp

Excellent

Roy,

Outstanding---Virtual six-star rating

This is a great poem telling how lost we are in a world of sin, but if we open our hearts and allow God in, He can fix it. Thanks for sharing your testimony and scripture. Thanks to a loving God, I once was lost, broken, and felt so alone; but He has made me whole thanks to His love grace, and mercy. Your poems always bless me.

Blessings...Portia

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Portia, for your delightful comments and great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Your poem speaks a deep truth, there is a vacant place in our soul that only God can fill. I am so glad that we can have a personal relationship with Him, He walks with us every day of our lives if we let Him.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Anne, for your encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy

reply by Anne Johnston on 18-Sep-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

I love the form and I love the poem. Yes, it does sound like God has touched you. The well-chosen words are composed in a very lovely fashion. I will bookcase this.

Ralf

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for these kind words and super review Ralf, blessings Roy

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

This sounds a little complicated but as you always do, you make it sound easy.
The rhymes are natural and the poem flows smoothly for such a complex form. Did you invent it?
I like your line "On earth's dark sod". Its filled with imagery.
Wonderfully done Roy.
Take care,
Katiemae

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Thanks KatieMae, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This monomeld, There is a Hole, has the proper formatting, as explained, and allows that God can provide the media to fill that empty spot and make one "whole".

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Thanks Bill, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I found this poem very interesting. I love the style that it is written in and the wistful artwork that you have chosen.You obviously had one hell of an experience. Blessings. Jen

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Thanks Jen, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is an intriguing piece of spiritual poetry dear Roy! I agree with your soft sentiment towards christ. A lovely poem altogether!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Thanks Robyn, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Exceptional

I think this is one of your best poems yet. It is an honest telling of your story and tells how many ways one can be misled. You have the form down pat and it is something new to learn. God is within you, my dear Prophet and you make each day something from which I learn. Very fine work here.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Thanks Sherry, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

You know one day during a discussion of Biblical issues, one of our elders made the comment that the reason Jesus made the statement that he was going back to heaven to prepare a place suitable for his anointed followers was that he was going back to wage war with Satan and evict him and the fallen angels out of heaven for ever. If Satan could tempt angels to sin and leave their posts in heaven, what chance did mere mortal men who had been resurrected to heaven have.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Thanks Bro, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Roy, again you show your great faith and I'm so pleased that you've got it. You've wriiten yet again a wonderful Poem. Now I'm curious. Is this just a new form you've created? Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021

Yes I?m guilty of this new form, a few others too, not that we need any new ones, there are plenty, but these forms suit me. Beautiful comments thank you blessings Roy