Family Roots
A loop poem for the contest6 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
I enjoyed reading this poem. I'm interested in the Loop poetry form and had never seen it -- or never noticed it at least, until FanStory. It has an intriguing effect. I also like the picture and the topic. It seems we've gotten away from the importance of family roots. I'd like to see the world or at least our country remember the importance. Well done.Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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I enjoyed reading this poem. I'm interested in the Loop poetry form and had never seen it -- or never noticed it at least, until FanStory. It has an intriguing effect. I also like the picture and the topic. It seems we've gotten away from the importance of family roots. I'd like to see the world or at least our country remember the importance. Well done.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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I am glad you enjoyed this poem on family roots and ties. Thank you for stopping by to share your insights.
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You are so welcome.
Comment from royowen
A sweetly written loop poem, written with all the deft professional ability and a most admirable and beautifully written work about the days that the pioneers settled in the land and with hardship.written in Heptameter and abcb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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A sweetly written loop poem, written with all the deft professional ability and a most admirable and beautifully written work about the days that the pioneers settled in the land and with hardship.written in Heptameter and abcb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Glad you could relate to this one on family roots. Always appreciate hearing your feedback. Thanks for dropping by today!
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Good job
Comment from dragonpoet
June,
This is a well done loop poem that tells us how roots and connections are formed and made stong. Our family history is what makes us strong.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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June,
This is a well done loop poem that tells us how roots and connections are formed and made stong. Our family history is what makes us strong.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Glad you could relate to this one on family roots. Always appreciate hearing your feedback. Thanks for dropping by today!
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No problem, June.
Joan
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem skillfully tells of the importance past history and sharing future hope and dreams plays in keeping a family strong - comparable to deep roots in a tree making it possible to weather storms.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Your poem skillfully tells of the importance past history and sharing future hope and dreams plays in keeping a family strong - comparable to deep roots in a tree making it possible to weather storms.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Glad you could relate to this one on family roots. Always appreciate hearing your feedback. Thanks for dropping by today!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. I like how you structured your poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. I like how you structured your poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The roots of a tree are often as deep as its height and this is true of human family ties, a fine loop poem for the contest June, a winner for me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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The roots of a tree are often as deep as its height and this is true of human family ties, a fine loop poem for the contest June, a winner for me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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I am happy this loop poem resonated with you. Family ties are important and can strenghten us through any storm that blows our way. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.