Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Very well done and I find it definitely creepy. It is a nightmare that has for Maria became reality. Very clever and creative.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

thanks for the comment. It was a dark poetic vision

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Definitely creepy and fits the supernatural theme very well. It flows smoothly and well and you have built up to the climax at the end very well. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

thanks for the comments, Wendy. Appreciate it.