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Wish You Were Here

A letter about every day stuff....

26 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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It's funny no one knows us better than our close companion in a physical, Elaine has absolutely no illusions about, but loves me anyway, we learn from the one who knows our every imperfection and died for us because He thought we were worth it, just love your letters Carol, keep them coming, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Roy

    At first I didn't know if it would help or not. but this morning I actually felt like Mike was there and we were having our usual morning talk. I could hear him laughing...his laughter was the best...and I laughed out loud too. It was awesome.

    Smiles, Carol
reply by royowen on 03-Aug-2021
    It?s so wonderful Carol
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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Beautiful, tender, and oh, so human. I think this idea might work for many folks. A simple and personal way to speak out with your thoughts. I believe they hear every word and smile down. Very nice work!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Sherry. It seems to help me when I write the letters as if I think they are listening and laughing with me. Thank you for your kindness and the stars.

    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
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Your stories are honest and beautiful, and reveal so much about your loved ones and you. All good! I can empathise with your frustration about the ride-on mower and trying to keep your acre looking good. As you say, it's those practical things, and they can be the most frustrating. That's when tears and loss are even more real. Beautifully written, Carol.
Just at one point (near the beginning), you used 'special' followed very quickly by 'especially' and I thought maybe they were too similar, and one could be changed. Not a big deal though. Hugs to you.
Wendy

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    thanks Wendy...

    That was an easy fix...especially wasn't even needed. I am learning through my book writing that adverbs are better left unused most of the time. They are necessary....though I do/did have a habit of lots of them. Working on a new ejection seat for them!!! LOl

    thank you so much for the kind thoughts and the review.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Letters to Heaven. I often wonder how much those of us who have gone on before us really know about what is happening to us now. I admire you for what you are doing here, digging into old memories and sharing them in the form of a letter. Hoping it gives you comfort and hope at this time.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Thanks, Anne. I wasn't sure until I started writing this morning. Tears streamed down my face while I typed, but the deeper I got into the letter, the more it seemed like we were sitting side by side and talking. I could even imagine his laughter...his laughter was the best. I don't know how others will feel, but it was a good moment for me.

    Smiles, Carol
reply by Anne Johnston on 02-Aug-2021
    You are welcome. I still shed tears at times when I think of my husband - he was my best friend next to the Lord.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed reading your letter, Carol, though it is poignant. I understand where it is coming from. You did a great job--so personal and informative I like the way you added insights to some of the statements with the blue font. Your letter flows smoothly, and readers can tell it is straight from y9our heart.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Jan

    I can't explain it but if felt like he was sitting there talking to me and laughing...I laughed out loud like we use to do. It was a good feeling.

    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Letters to Heaven, what a great way to pass the time and visit with those you love. I wonder if they'll send mail to where I'm going? Or if it'll burn up before I get it. LOL. Of course, I hope I'm wrong . . . but it doesn't make me act much better. Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful week!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Now you are acting and sounding just like Mike... I just told Karenina that I'd ask him to put in a good word for her recovery. I also added that he's probably banded with some other borderline angels, and who knows what ideas they might come up with, so be prepared. LOL, Your penance so you can join all of us when it's your time...at least I hope I'll be there... is to put up with me until then and to make me laugh.

    Smiles and hugs..Carol
Comment from karenina
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OH Carol. I can't begin to tell you how warmly this embraced me. These are the sorts of conversations I have with my own loved ones who have passed... Conversations (for you and I know they aren't really monologues as we can hear with our heart what our heavenly angels are replying!)-- It's these every day things we all miss. I never once thought if only my dad were still here, or my ex-fiance' hadn't ended his life I'd do THIS different or go THERE. I always just wish I could sit and chat again, see their smile, hear their exasperated sigh or beneath the breath chuckle. How much more intense this must be when it is your husband!
You've written beautiful lines and threaded each one together with faith and hope and love. That's the very best we can do when God sees fit to have us carry on! Beautiful!--Karenina

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Okay, I am crying like a faucet... I know you truly understand where I was coming from this morning as I wrote this. It sounds crazy, but I felt he was here, listening, and I could hear exactly how he would say things to me. And his laughter... our laughter... there wasn't anything better than to start a morning laughing with him. Even though tears were streaming down my face while I typed...I felt happy. I read the letter out loud, and I laughed because I knew he was laughing too. Oh God, I miss him. I know he would be thrilled that I found you, and we share so much.

    I'll ask him to put in a good word for your recovery, but don't be surprised if weird things happen. I am sure he's not the only untamed angel, and one never knows what they might believe is their heavenly duty. LOL Hmmm... sounds like there's a story hidden in there somewhere. LOL

    Thanks again for all your love, kindness, and thoughts. And the golden stars. Someone told me today, I had to share them with Mike... He's already got a whole sky full of them...but I'll share anyhow.

    Love you, Carol
reply by karenina on 03-Aug-2021
    I just know Mike and I would have gotten along famously! The idea of a rebel angel is a fine story idea! See? He's channeling story ideas to you through me! I can feel him smiling.
    Karenina
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very sweet and heartfelt letter to your honey. You used such loving and down to earth words. I enjoyed reading all of it. I have lost so many of my family members too. I truly can relate to what you have said my friend. Thank you for writing. Just keep on writing and I will keep on reading. May God bless you sweet friend! love, Teri

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Now here's a good one for you, Teri. So glad you read this one. I felt good this morning. It felt like he was there talking to me and laughing. His laughter was the best! Thanks so much for the review and for your kind thoughts.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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Ah! What a beautifully penned letter dripping with love. Memories are sweet, one must cherish them. The worst part of holding the memories is not the pain. It's the loneliness of it. Memories need to be shared. But I know looking back on the laughter-filled days would bring tears. Be brave. Take care. Blessings!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Hello Seshadri...

    Thank you for your kind review. You are right...I cried...but for some unknown reason, I felt good. It was like I could hear him and knew exactly what he would say and his laughter... our laughter together was the best!

    Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I do understand the love and humor in each letter. I am sure your husband is reading and smiling and probably a tear or two. I am sure this is therapy for you and for others in a similar situation.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
    Good morning, Barbara

    I wasn't sure about writing this one this morning, but I am glad that I did. It's strange but as I wrote I could hear him and what he would say and his laughter... his laughter was the best. I cried this morning but I also felt I'd shared a moment with him.

    Smiles, Carol
reply by barbara.wilkey on 02-Aug-2021
    Moments like that are important.