Untethered Dreams
two line poetry29 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, relaxing among nature can bring on daydreams, Melissa.
The artwork looks like she is sleeping in the stream not just sitting next to it.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Yes, relaxing among nature can bring on daydreams, Melissa.
The artwork looks like she is sleeping in the stream not just sitting next to it.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 10-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Hello. I am sorry for the late note of thanks. I really appreciate your comments!!!
Melissa
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Hi Melissa.
Thats fine.
You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from Jarvis Popovich
Nice little poem that encapsulates the essence of feeling. It thrusts the reader into a kaleidoscope of senses. We all know this feeling of dreams, and streams, and wish it happened more often.
Great structure and rhyme.
Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Nice little poem that encapsulates the essence of feeling. It thrusts the reader into a kaleidoscope of senses. We all know this feeling of dreams, and streams, and wish it happened more often.
Great structure and rhyme.
Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Hello Jarvis. Thank you so very much!!
Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
Nice, Melissa. I do the same, but I only have trees, the closes water is about a mile and downhill through other trees and slippery snakes. :) I rather stay under the shade and daydream upon a star as the day passes by. This is a good offering for the Two Line Poem Contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Nice, Melissa. I do the same, but I only have trees, the closes water is about a mile and downhill through other trees and slippery snakes. :) I rather stay under the shade and daydream upon a star as the day passes by. This is a good offering for the Two Line Poem Contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Thank you Jose. I am glad you get lost in the fascination of stars as you daydream down there in Texas. :)
Melissa
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Untethered Dreams", is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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"Untethered Dreams", is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Hi there Duchess? thank you for your lovely words.
Melilssa
Hi there Melissa. The lovely words were definitely earnt.
the Duchess
Comment from Patty Palmer
That says a lot in just two lines of poetry. That's the way I am also. I spend a lot of time in daydreams. I can do and be whatever I please in a daydream. Thanks for sharing.
Patty
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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That says a lot in just two lines of poetry. That's the way I am also. I spend a lot of time in daydreams. I can do and be whatever I please in a daydream. Thanks for sharing.
Patty
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Hello Patty. Thanks so much!!!
Melissa
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Daydreaming is usually a pleasant experience in which people slip into wishful thinking while awake. I daydream all the time lying on the bed at home or anywhere. Daydreaming into harmful and at times turn out to be inspiring. I liked your short poem so elegantly penned. Good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Daydreaming is usually a pleasant experience in which people slip into wishful thinking while awake. I daydream all the time lying on the bed at home or anywhere. Daydreaming into harmful and at times turn out to be inspiring. I liked your short poem so elegantly penned. Good luck!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much Seshadri! :)
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I love this poem. It is so beautifully written in merely two lines. I can see the image of you sitting by the stream day-dreaming. There was a swan in the water. The art is also very creative.
Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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I love this poem. It is so beautifully written in merely two lines. I can see the image of you sitting by the stream day-dreaming. There was a swan in the water. The art is also very creative.
Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Hi Lisa? so good to see your name. Hope you are well and prospering. Thank you for your wonderful thoughts on this short two line verse. :). I look forward to reading your poetry too.
Melissa
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I have been busy and traveling. Took a trip to Utah and visited all five national parks. I have to write some poems about it.
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful picture and love that title: "Untethered dreams." It's nice to let some daydreams take over and perhaps that's the seed of writing inspiration. Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Beautiful picture and love that title: "Untethered dreams." It's nice to let some daydreams take over and perhaps that's the seed of writing inspiration. Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much, Helen. I love daydreaming and thinking up ideas for poetry. It is such fun! :)
Melissa
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Thanks so much, Helen. I love daydreaming and thinking up ideas for poetry. It is such fun! :)
Melissa
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And you can daydream while gardening - a very portable way to be inspired!
Comment from Debbie Pope
I should stop reviewing your poems on Saturday when I have no six stars left. Unfortunately, Mary Ellis is asleep, and now is when I have time to review.
This is a good essence poem. Your internal and final rhymes are good, and the overall effect of your 12 syllables is beautiful. That photo really complements your poem.
Good luck in the contest with this one. Hope you live inside a few daydreams today.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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I should stop reviewing your poems on Saturday when I have no six stars left. Unfortunately, Mary Ellis is asleep, and now is when I have time to review.
This is a good essence poem. Your internal and final rhymes are good, and the overall effect of your 12 syllables is beautiful. That photo really complements your poem.
Good luck in the contest with this one. Hope you live inside a few daydreams today.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Hi Debbie. Thank you. I deeply appreciate your reviews and helpful comments. They always encourage me. Hugs!
Melissa
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Hi Debbie. Thank you. I deeply appreciate your reviews and helpful comments. They always encourage me. Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from robyn corum
Mel,
Ahhhhhh.... so peaceful... May I join you?
These seem like they could be the words of a fairy sprite. (yep, that's you!) She's been busy, busy with polinating flowers and arranging first dates with hummingbirds and butterflies and she is pooped! Time for a little well-deserved nap. And what does she do while resting? Oh, yeah - just think of more magic she can bring to life!
So fun! Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Mel,
Ahhhhhh.... so peaceful... May I join you?
These seem like they could be the words of a fairy sprite. (yep, that's you!) She's been busy, busy with polinating flowers and arranging first dates with hummingbirds and butterflies and she is pooped! Time for a little well-deserved nap. And what does she do while resting? Oh, yeah - just think of more magic she can bring to life!
So fun! Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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I have never been compared to a fairy sprite? I like it.. a lot!! :). Thanks, sweet Robyn!!
Melissa
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I have never been compared to a fairy sprite? I like it.. a lot!! :). Thanks, sweet Robyn!!
Melissa
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Hahaha!! That makes me sad. It is long overdue, then!!