Madness Reigns
In the United States of Anger...9 total reviews
Comment from Chris Davies
This poem hits home. So sad to see what's happening and you've captured it well. Also managing to incorporate the list of words for the contest. I'm glad your poem was so well received.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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This poem hits home. So sad to see what's happening and you've captured it well. Also managing to incorporate the list of words for the contest. I'm glad your poem was so well received.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this great review and for recognizing what's going on in this country. We need more people like you. :)
Comment from LisaMay
Graphic is certainly the key word in your poem and choice of photograph to accompany it. Living in the United States of Anger has become a matter of being lucky to dodge death. Your poem is emphatic with outrage at what has happened to society.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Graphic is certainly the key word in your poem and choice of photograph to accompany it. Living in the United States of Anger has become a matter of being lucky to dodge death. Your poem is emphatic with outrage at what has happened to society.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem. I don't think that this can go on any longer without dire consequences. Thanks so much for reading my poem.
Comment from equestrik
There is a lot of stark truth here and love and concern for our beloved country. It is a sad commentary on humanity when life and living comes down to such inhumanity.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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There is a lot of stark truth here and love and concern for our beloved country. It is a sad commentary on humanity when life and living comes down to such inhumanity.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this great review and for picking up on the fact that I really do care and worry for America. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
You use your words wisely in this very important, pertinate poem.
You have a nice rhyme scheme--its meaning is clear, I like this excellent poem very much.
Best wishes for the contest.
Cindy
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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You use your words wisely in this very important, pertinate poem.
You have a nice rhyme scheme--its meaning is clear, I like this excellent poem very much.
Best wishes for the contest.
Cindy
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, I really do appreciate it. :)
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You?re welcome, mystery author.
Good luck!
Comment from JudyE
I hear what you are saying. Sometimes the world seems full of hate and senseless violence. You do have to wonder where it will all end.
There is a typo in the following:
graphic violence, worse then I've ever seen - it should be '... THAN I've ever seen'
Thanks for a thought-provoking poem and good luck in the contest.
Judy
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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I hear what you are saying. Sometimes the world seems full of hate and senseless violence. You do have to wonder where it will all end.
There is a typo in the following:
graphic violence, worse then I've ever seen - it should be '... THAN I've ever seen'
Thanks for a thought-provoking poem and good luck in the contest.
Judy
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this great review and for the correction...both are appreciated. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, this is so shocking. Is this what happens in America these days? I can't believe it. I hope they find the culprits. A poignant poem about the tragedy on the streets, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Oh my goodness, this is so shocking. Is this what happens in America these days? I can't believe it. I hope they find the culprits. A poignant poem about the tragedy on the streets, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Sadly, this is the state of affairs in this country, at least in the larger cities. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
A very powerful piece filled with hard truths. I pray for this country every day. The violence is scary and shouldn't be a political issue. It is. Humanity issue. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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A very powerful piece filled with hard truths. I pray for this country every day. The violence is scary and shouldn't be a political issue. It is. Humanity issue. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this amazingly great review. :)
Comment from Lana Marie
Good job using all the words graphic, joy, Death, and spice.. that are required for this writing prompt. It is sad all the stuff is going on in this world good job wrapping it up into this writing. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Good job using all the words graphic, joy, Death, and spice.. that are required for this writing prompt. It is sad all the stuff is going on in this world good job wrapping it up into this writing. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from MAMONIA
Great job. You managed to get all those words in this poem and make sense out of what you say.
It is a terrible disgrace that we suffer in the world today. No one should have a blind eye to all this violence. We need to make the change, demand the change, and assert ourselves to the politicians who can offer the change.
Violence is not an option.
Great write. Lots of luck in the contest.
Marie
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Great job. You managed to get all those words in this poem and make sense out of what you say.
It is a terrible disgrace that we suffer in the world today. No one should have a blind eye to all this violence. We need to make the change, demand the change, and assert ourselves to the politicians who can offer the change.
Violence is not an option.
Great write. Lots of luck in the contest.
Marie
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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I couldn't agree more. I fear for this country if this continues, not just for our generation but for future ones. Thanks for reading my poem and for your insightful comments. :)
